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How to Make Friends and Monsters

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Shadeleaf
Shadeleaf wrote:
2014-01-08 16:43:58 -0800

No me.... where's the magic? Where's the adventure?

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Shadeleaf
Shadeleaf wrote:
2014-01-08 16:43:58 -0800

No me.... where's the magic? Where's the adventure?

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PinkiePie14
PinkiePie14 wrote:
2014-01-08 14:12:55 -0800

awesome !

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LeiFontCatMan
LeiFontCatMan wrote:
2014-01-04 14:03:39 -0800

i aredy am acblade13

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sammycg45
sammycg45 wrote:
2013-12-23 12:21:21 -0800

I so want that

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vig203
vig203 wrote:
2013-10-23 23:54:30 -0700

ha haa haaa

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sugarpetals
sugarpetals wrote:
2013-10-05 06:19:56 -0700

Dazed

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caley blue
caley blue wrote:
2013-10-05 06:16:33 -0700

i would say booooo

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matthew100
matthew100 wrote:
2013-08-10 14:34:44 -0700

ha ha haa

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yash149
yash149 wrote:
2013-08-01 04:46:27 -0700

I don't think that is good Sad

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LilFlowerGirl04
LilFlowerGirl04 wrote:
2013-07-31 17:09:07 -0700

i never seen that book be4

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Capius
Capius wrote:
2013-07-31 14:09:45 -0700

It looks....okay I guess but kinda stupid. Frustrated

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hugebear
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hugebear wrote:
2013-07-31 13:46:28 -0700

hmm

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yaverleaf11
yaverleaf11 wrote:
2013-07-31 12:11:47 -0700

No offense, but it wasn't that good......Frown

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brunostar
brunostar wrote:
2013-07-31 12:02:15 -0700

Cool Grin

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kaylaloveeu_2236160
kaylaloveeu_2236160 wrote:
2013-07-29 22:15:20 -0700

looking thro the pics

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jordand08
jordand08 wrote:
2013-07-29 21:04:41 -0700

Nice

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sweetshay
sweetshay wrote:
2013-07-29 18:04:45 -0700

it look like a great book

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J zizzy
J zizzy wrote:
2013-07-29 18:02:09 -0700

i might read it

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colleenaw
colleenaw wrote:
2013-07-29 17:32:25 -0700

Cool

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Monsters-poll

Would you be friends with a monster?

  • Yes!
  • No way
  • I already am!

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Jolly-Rancher206
 Lotta quick fixes here. "brunt earth, the brunt smell..." You mean burnt, right? "I decided to get to the top...I run up...and grabbed" Tense issues. You should change run to ran. “I had climbed buildings and other stuff” How about other structures? “They all had cuts and bruises covering the surface of their skin.” Could just be nitpicking, but that sounds a bit awkward. I suggest on the skin or you can cut that part out all together. “An intimidating enemy was definitely what I though of at first sight” I'd write, He struck me as an intimidating enemy at first sight. “Purple aura surrounded his body and his hands had the same expect it was amore intense, vibrant purple.” What? I think you accidentally omitted something. You're trying to compare his powers to someone else, right...? "augmented my energy" I know what you're trying to say, but I there are better words. Summoned. Mustered. Magnified. Intensified. There's some other stuff, but nothing major. The only things I'm seeing are awkward wordings. Don't worry to much about grammatical things until you're done with everything. I think it's easier to be able to examine the work in its entirety.
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Taidoku
Taidoku posted in Say Anything:
O: O: O: O: O: O: O: O: YOUR EVILE? AHHHHHHH
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Thunderpandapaw
"Taidoku" wrote:EVEN THOUGH I JUST USED EXCLAMATION MARKS THERE, DOESNT MEAN IM EVIL, BUT IT MEANS YOU TRICKED ME INTO PUTTING EXCLAMATION MARKS, MERE MORTAL Yassss, I am evil. You now know my secret. o.o 
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Taidoku
Taidoku posted in Say Anything:
EVEN THOUGH I JUST USED EXCLAMATION MARKS THERE, DOESNT MEAN IM EVIL, BUT IT MEANS YOU TRICKED ME INTO PUTTING EXCLAMATION MARKS, MERE MORTAL
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Taidoku
Taidoku posted in Say Anything:
"Thunderpandapaw" wrote:It's just a chat forum! You can talk about anything you want! :3Sorry, I just like typing with exclamation points.  Exclamations marks are EVILE!!!
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