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Book Review: Escape From Mr. Lemoncello's Library

Mr. Lemoncello, an eccentric game maker, invites 12 students to the new library's grand-opening lock-in, where they each get a shot at the prize of a lifetime. Kidzworld has the book review of Escape From Mr. Lemoncello's Library by Chris Grabenstein. Back to Article

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Jonathan244
Jonathan244 wrote:
2014-01-16 15:42:10 -0800

love

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SuperGalBunny123
SuperGalBunny123 wrote:
2013-11-20 18:46:40 -0800

me 2!

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FireDraken
FireDraken wrote:
2013-10-04 19:58:04 -0700

I loved this book! I wish my library had something like this.

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JennyD
JennyD wrote:
2013-08-05 18:04:25 -0700

I want to read this book!

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Do you go to the library?

  • Yes, I love going to the library.
  • I check books out of my school library.
  • No, I buy books or get them as gifts.
  • I don't read.

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