Books and Comics
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No problem. I need the critisim. If i don't get it, how will i ever get better? Thanks by the way it took me quite long to finish such a short poem
"mon135" wrote:My critism is still under construction, so do not blame me. A beautiful poem. Describes the functions of the stars in such a way, I was shocked. I give it two thumbs up.