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I moved up classes when everyone was learning how to write Essays so I never really learnt, so how do you write an essay - like the structure.

There are these posters on my class walls like using a hamburger to explain it but I don't really understand it o.o



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Intro - what your essay is addressing. The thesis statement.  (top bun)

Body paragraph - information relating to the thesis. (meat, cheese, toppings, etc)

Body paragraph - information relating to the thesis.(meat, cheese, toppings, etc)

Body paragraph - information relating to the thesis.(meat, cheese, toppings, etc)

Conclusion - reiterate the thesis. If your beginning thesis was something similar to "The Industrial Revolution caused significant environmental concerns," you'd want your conclusion to reflect the truth of what you've written by saying "The aforementioned details make it clear that the Industrial Revolution has caused significant environmental concerns." Try to end every single essay with a quote from someone famous if you can, unless it's DBQ. (bottom bun)

Mutual caring relationships require kindness and patience, tolerance, optimism, joy in the other's achievements, confidence in oneself, and the ability to give without undue thought of gain.


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Pls help me write a essay on a road accident!

angelaDS Smile Nose


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"-Zachary-" wrote:

Intro - what your essay is addressing. The thesis statement.  (top bun)


Body paragraph - information relating to the thesis. (meat, cheese, toppings, etc)


Body paragraph - information relating to the thesis.(meat, cheese, toppings, etc)


Body paragraph - information relating to the thesis.(meat, cheese, toppings, etc)


Conclusion - reiterate the thesis. If your beginning thesis was something similar to "The Industrial Revolution caused significant environmental concerns," you'd want your conclusion to reflect the truth of what you've written by saying "The aforementioned details make it clear that the Industrial Revolution has caused significant environmental concerns." Try to end every single essay with a quote from someone famous if you can, unless it's DBQ. (bottom bun)


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