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ArIaNa iz AWSUM
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i had to write a persuasive essay for LA. and well...i always have trouble writing a strong closing paragraph.Frown my topic is longer school hours for a Spanish class and im opposing to it.my reasons are *its a ridiculous new rule *we can teach our parents spanish-i think that you can just go to a community center if you want to learn AND teach your parents *extra school hours could help us-i think that an extra hour of school isnt going to help our math grades go up.we get homework every day,if you take away that hour for studying or any homework,you get bad test scores *it could help us get a good job-you dont have to JUST know spanish to get a good job ok those are my reasons. can someone help me write a paragraph summarizing the arguments and then closing it with a powerful statement relating to my originally stated issue???(my paper says all that xD) thanks, ariana

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HELLLLLLLLLLLP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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HELLLLLP MEEEEEEEE!! Frown

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PLEASE..Frown Frown Frown Frown somebody help meeeee...

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Now in your case I want you to make sure you can STRONGLY support each reason you choose. Then when you restate your essay say "In conclusion because of "reasons" I disapprove of the choice to add hours to the school day so we can take a spanish class. I hope I helped Big GrinBig GrinBig Grin

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I gotta do a persuasive speech. And it's all a big, big lie. 'Cause I don't agree with any of it. Just like, if you're struggling to get an ending paragraph, like PrincessCarly said, just do your conclusion and basicly summarise what you've said.

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HELLLLLLLLLLLP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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"GawjussGracieex" wrote:

I gotta do a persuasive speech. And it's all a big, big lie. 'Cause I don't agree with any of it. Just like, if you're struggling to get an ending paragraph, like PrincessCarly said, just do your conclusion and basicly summarise what you've said.
What is your topic of the speech?

I just want to be the only girl you love all your life


HELLLLLLLLLLLP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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"PrincessCarly" wrote:

"GawjussGracieex" wrote:

I gotta do a persuasive speech. And it's all a big, big lie. 'Cause I don't agree with any of it. Just like, if you're struggling to get an ending paragraph, like PrincessCarly said, just do your conclusion and basicly summarise what you've said.
What is your topic of the speech?
About a Novel. I've got to persuade that the chosen character is the most important character in the whole Novel - when he's really, clearly, obviously, blatently not. -__-

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HELLLLLLLLLLLP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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"GawjussGracieex" wrote:

"PrincessCarly" wrote:

"GawjussGracieex" wrote:

I gotta do a persuasive speech. And it's all a big, big lie. 'Cause I don't agree with any of it. Just like, if you're struggling to get an ending paragraph, like PrincessCarly said, just do your conclusion and basicly summarise what you've said.
What is your topic of the speech?
About a Novel. I've got to persuade that the chosen character is the most important character in the whole Novel - when he's really, clearly, obviously, blatently not. -__-
That's dumb.

I just want to be the only girl you love all your life


HELLLLLLLLLLLP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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"PrincessCarly" wrote:

Now in your case I want you to make sure you can STRONGLY support each reason you choose. Then when you restate your essay say "In conclusion because of "reasons" I disapprove of the choice to add hours to the school day so we can take a spanish class. I hope I helped Big GrinBig GrinBig Grin
yeah you did...but it wouldve helped even more if it was on my paperBig Frown( i had to finish it yesterday so i didnt even bother to check on here..today it was due.. and i just checked right now to see if anybody read this Big Frown(( thanks anywaysmile

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It's not a figure of speech when I tell you that I dumped her.


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