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do u like the chorus of my song???
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poprock111
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Posted : Sun Jun 15 11:31:13 2008

Oh Why? by moi!!!

[chorus]

Oh Why,

Why can''t you see

We were meant to be

Oh Why,

Waste you time

With that girl

from Tennesse

Oh Why

Why can''t you see

You were made for me

I was made for you

Together we can break through

Oh Why.

so what do u think, I know it looks long but that is only the way I have written it, I don''t mind if u hate it cuz diffeent ppl have different opinions. plz rate these lyrics from 0.0 to 5 and if u think that it needs improving plz just say so cuz I won''t mind. plz don''t be rude bout it though. thanx!!!

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poprock111
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Posted : Mon Jun 16 15:55:09 2008

come on ppl, like it or not????

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poprock111
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Posted : Thu Jun 19 19:50:03 2008

*pleading*ppl, plz. *pleading*I am dying to know what u think!!! plz *pleading*

*down on knees, hands in the air, clenched together, begging*

*pleading* PLZZZZZZZZZZZZ*pleading*

lolzlolzlolzlolz

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-megadethchick-
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Posted : Thu Jun 19 19:53:29 2008

i dont really like it.

sorry.

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poprock111
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Posted : Fri Jun 20 20:19:53 2008

Date: 6/19/2008 7:53:29 PM Author: xxwho knewxx
i dont really like it.

:

sorry.

It''s ok, different Winktongue

pl have different opinions!!!

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-Beautiful-Disaster-
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Posted : Thu Jun 26 20:51:13 2008

I think that line about a girl from Tennesse kind of bombed the song for me. Fustrated

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poprock111
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Posted : Fri Jun 27 16:38:54 2008

Date: 6/26/2008 8:51:13 PM Author: �II� c I think that line about a girl from Tennesse kind of bombed the song for me.

well, it fit in. she wasn''t actually from tennesse, she was just from America. I don''t know many american countries so I just chose tennesse.

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Karmacraze
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Posted : Sun Jun 29 21:07:54 2008

no sry

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iAlyx
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Posted : Sat Jul 12 04:48:52 2008

I like it, but even though you think Tennesee fit, it really doesn''t...It threw me off, but that''s the only thing I don''t like about it! If you cross out that line, it''ll be great. =)

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mj925
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Posted : Mon Aug 11 11:49:08 2008

no srry! it kinda sounds lik something i heard of b4!

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