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Good song smile

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its all right, maybe a lil more chorusGrin

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"Karlayac" wrote:

so here's a song that I wrote and I just want your opinions on it 

so the song talks about having fun and dancing no matter what 

so here are the lyrics:



I can see you from far away

But here's what I wanna say,

It doesn't have to look like it took forever

And dancing, will you ever?


It's sitting there, waiting for you

But if you don't, for you, we will boo

But you don't seem to have clue

But here's what we'll do:


(chorus)

I will shake my skirt and you'll fly me so high

higher that the heels for me you ever bought

And we'll dance until gravity can't stand us anymore


That time we'll fly and Lock, Block,Shock all the no's 

and never never stop!




(not chorus)


Look at him now 

From me, so far away

Who thought that on his bed, he will lay?

And a game, he won't play

And a word, he won't say



And above that, I will stay.

Do you know what we came here for?

Do you know what we've been waiting for?


And waiting, What for?!



But here's what we'll do:


(chorus)

I will shake my skirt and you'll fly me so high 

higher than the heels for me you ever bought

and we'll dance until gravity can't stand us anymore,


That time we'll fly and Lock, Block,Shock all the no's

And never never stop!



(not chorus)

But for you it's no big deal

And a cold, I will feel

And a silly dream, will be real

But even if you drop, Don't don't stop!






very nice! keep it up 

I love shinchan..Big Grin


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It's called verse. Anyway well if it'scyour first time yhen ok. But the song well I did not get it.

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It's a very beautiful song smile You have potential.

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