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AshleyEatsTheSky
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June, 2012

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I wrote this song a little while back, so what do You think? ;; Verse One; They tell me to be myself but, I'm planning out a different route, and it seems as if I'm stuck in glue. Interlude; I'm gonna be - Who I want to be so, Chorus; You can't tell me what to do You can't tell me what to wear. You can't tell me what to say, I'm doing it my own way. Verse Two; The stoplights on go And now I know what I'm gonna do I'm hoping that you'll come to, your senses soon. [Chorus Solo; You know my name, not my story I'm not with you, so don't chu wor-or-y I'm being myself, - not caring 'bout anyone else I'm hoping that you'll follow me_____! [Chorus So Yeah, Urm.. That was like only the second song that I've ever written. I was never good at writing songs, and this is the best one yet.. So Yeah.. Positive or negative feedback is appreciated. Be honest. I just wanted to see if I could get any advice for future song writing. (: Thanks. ♥

Come On Baby, Keep It Down. Honey Hush Your Lips. Clothes Trailing from the backdoor to the bedroom. And I Don't Even Know Your Name. Give Me All You've Got. Make This Night Worth My Time.

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Posted By:

Nikkii_aka_sweet
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I love it

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{~*#Team_Dimples*~} Niicole♥♥ (:

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Posted By:

ParadiseHeart
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September, 2011

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It's a yes! Grin

-Kida;♥

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Posted By:

AshleyEatsTheSky
Member since:
June, 2012

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Thanks. xD

Come On Baby, Keep It Down. Honey Hush Your Lips. Clothes Trailing from the backdoor to the bedroom. And I Don't Even Know Your Name. Give Me All You've Got. Make This Night Worth My Time.