"pixiedust71" wrote:

"Princess of Webkinz" wrote:

Ok so it is posted in the same forum but I still think that both my song is better and that I am being abandoned. Am I not under enough pressure? My crush likes somebody else, my dad ends up taking anger out on me when it's not my fault that his 1rst girlfriend since my grama and grampa died last October is thinking about breaking up with him, I cant do all of my summer plans because they involved my Amma Cali and Grampa Steve and they're the ones on the news in October that died in a motorcycle crash on Wavy 10 news, can things get any worse after this????? Btw: I thought songs were at least supposed to rhyme once. . . Am I wrong? Didn't think so. ->

That is not very nice and I think the other song is better and I could write a way better song than yours your song is going back to the same thing it does not sound like a good song and it is not so if you have that attitude I dont even think you should even have ONE comment on your dumb song because im also talking about your other posts on this topic that are not nice and nobody should feel sorry for you because i dont care if your under pressure because im under pressure my sister is under pressure but do i take it out on others no unlike you saying you are abandoned because you just want some people to feel sorry for you when nobody should feel sorry for you and songs dont have to rhyme if you want them to be good but yours is not even close to ok because it really is a bad song.

Im just making a point, you don't have to be so mean about it, it's bad enough that nobody likes me, I only have two friends, my mom doesn't even try to support me, my moms dating a guy that treats me like his own when I'm not and I'll never be happy again no matter what, so you don't have to be so mean. Bad enough everybody at school bullies me and the only person in my own family that treats me nicely at all is my aunt. And she doesn't even get me a small peice of candy on my b-day or Christmas, EVER!! And now this. People always say I'm ugly, untalented, and annoying. May as well kill myself in the most painful way, wouldnt be able to tell the difference between that and my life. 

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And Im not just trying to get people to feel sorry for me since it's the truth I must have the worst life in the history of lives.     

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i'm not trying to be mean to you. i'm not looking for pity. i hate pity. i'm sorry that your grandparents died. i'm sorry that your life is all the things that your life is. don't kill yourself. people love you, you jsut don't know it. ask me how i know. you could be happy if you just chose to be. my grandpa, my favorite grandpa is living with us, and we can't tell him that, because he'll forget five minutes later. he's got like 2 years left in his life and he should live longer than that. my mom is suffering losing him. my crush likes somebody else too. but that's why it's a crush. if you want it to be anymore than that, kiss him. it draws attention to you. i doubt your ugly. everybody is beautiful in their own way. my sister has a boyfriend and she has braces so he can't kiss her yet, cause he might get hurt. i have a small crush on him. i know your going to think this is dorky, but for the bullies at school, either ignore them and just live with it and stop complaining about it, or.... blood won't go away unless you make it. you have to do something about your problems or they're never gonna get better. don't complain if you won't do anything about it.

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This song is called Always By Your Side sung by Daisuke Kirii (Since this song is Japanese, i will use the English translation). Without saying anything, I'm right by your side At anytime Gently tell me your sad thoughts Because I'm listening If my inability to express things well Troubles you Then close your eyes and gently entrust me Because I'll embrace you Within the passing seasons, now There is one certain thing inside of my chest If it's to protect you Then I won't regret a thing Because I'll take any pain in your stead I'll always be by your side Because when I learn that I didn't realize your feelings I want to send you Everything that I can do in my power I match my pace with you all the time Because I have still an unchanging thought now So that the warmth of when we embraced Won't ever disappear I'll wipe away your spilling tears I'll always be by your side If it's to protect you Then I won't regret a thing Because I'll take any pain in your stead Always smiling by your side So that the warmth of when we embraced Won't ever disappear I'll wipe away your spilling tears I'll always be by your side

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I REALLLLLLYYYYY LIKKKEEEDDD!!!!! that. that is amazing!

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Before I go to sleep, I imagine you by my side, but usually everybody's tells me their advice... Wait for the boy that would do... anything to be your... everything!! Wait for the boy that would look at you and say your beautiful!

OK JUST TO LET YOU KNOW THIS IS NOT THE WHOLE SONG IT'S JUST A PART! HOPE YOU LIKE IT!

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This is my first song that i will make.
It might not be complete, so please take time to read the lyrics, and appreciate it.

1. Wish I was someone else - Me

Chorus

Wish I was someone else, was someone else, was someone else (Repeat)

Verse 1

I was at your side
Recognized it was your birthday
I decided to give you a cake
Will it be a good cake or not? (Chorus)

Verse 2

Really just thinking of you
Your birthday wish might be true
Just give you flowers and I give up
But I really still want to be with you 'cause I (Chorus)

(Repeat Verse 1)

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[Hook]
R.I.P we just killed the club
Drank patron out the bottle, almost killed a thug
Im so high I can't feel the #####
Too many haters sitting here
I dont feel the love
R.I.P (X4)
R.I.P we just killed the club
Took patron to the head, almost killed a thug

[Verse 1: Young Jeezy]
Im in a brand new drop top 'Rari with 3 #######
Tired being in the middle of trial with 3 snitches
And I hit up every club in your city
Where ###### at?
I be in every club in the hood
Where ###### at?
Pull up, jump out stuntin like I was Baby
On my ####### cowboy ####, like in the 80's
Who the ##### think he is
Slick Rick or Dana Dane
Think he Rakim or somethin, look at his chain
YSL, from head to toe, Im Doug E Fresh
Looking like I came to play, Mitchell and Ness
Any ##### with a watch like that
He need attention
Your man dont ball out like that
You need to bench him

[Hook]

[Verse 2: Young Jeezy]
Im gone, dont know where Im going
Pockets on extra big, they on Samoan
Got some bad ####### all in my section
Just let some more in
And every ##### came in with me'll kick your door in
Roll up, pass it around like we Jamaican
Whole pounds strapped up in this ##### like we some Haitians
She got good head, good brains, good education
Im drunker than a ############, heres the situation:
1:45 am, the knob broken
By the time a ##### get to the crib, the mall open
Man the nerve of this high-### #####
She on the Molly
She said she she want me to call her Ms. Berry
She think she Halle

[Hook]

[Verse 3: 2 Chainz]
Got a pocket full of dead prez
Attatched to your girl like a .jpeg
Party scene turn to a murder scene
Keep ####### on ######, need potty train
Turn up, collard green
Im on gasoline and
Im on that promethazine
Life ain't nothin but a G thing
Switch lanes, get brain, hand down her g-string
Im the type of ##### thats built to last
You #### with me, Ill put my foot in your ###
I got a million in stash, I stack my money so tall
That you might need a giraffe
When you was countin this cash, #####!

[Hook]

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Now, my next song :

2. Drink it up - Me

Verse 1

I was just waiting for my group
To head here and have our session (Yeah)
Yeah, we're drinking it up! (Yeah!)
Let's drink all night!

Chorus

Just sip it, get your drink 
Yeah, let's drink it up!
Just drink it 'till midnight
Until everybody sleeps
Yeah, let's drink it up! (Drink it up!)

Verse 2

If I were just gonna sip it up
Just never ever ever miss a sip (Of your drink)
We're drinking 'till we die ('Till we're sick)
Yeah, let's (Chorus)

Verse 3

Yeah, yeah, yeah
We're so tired, we're so weak
So, we can't go, have more bottles

So, we can't just sip it
We can't have our drink
We can't drink it up!
We need to sleep now
We can't drink it up, oh! (Chorus 2 times)

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"Sweet Nothing"

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