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missbeauitful
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Posted over 3 years ago
Haii I'm Jill a 13 year old song writer and I wanted to know how these lyrics wereXD please be honest! You get on with life as a Singer,You're a Caring kinda person.You like Singing on Sundays,You like Sports in the week.You like to contemplate Me .But when you start to daydream,Your mind turns straight to You.Sometimes I look at you and I look into your eyes,I notice the way you think about You with a smile,Curved lips you just can't disguise.But you think it's Me making your life worthwhile.Why is it so hard for you to decide which you love more?Me or...You?You like to use words like 'Epic,'You like to use words like 'Love.'You like to use words about Me .But when you stop your talking,Your mind turns straight to You.Sometimes I look at you and I look into your eyes,I notice the way you think about You with a smile,Curved lips you just can't disguise.But you think it's Me making your life worthwhile.Why is it so hard for you to decide which you love more?Me or...You?You like to hang out with Darcy,You like to kick back with Casey,But when left alone,Your mind turns straight to You.Sometimes I look at you and I look into your eyes,I notice the way you think about You with a smile,Curved lips you just can't disguise.But you think it's Me making your life worthwhile.Why is it so hard for you to decide which you love more?Me or...You?You're not too fond of Computer,You really hate Tv,But you just think back to You,And you're happy once again.

#TeamJill
#Jillsta f0r3v3r
--I am in love with the singer Jill-


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Posted over 3 years ago
I don't like it. I really don't like how 80% of the song is: .But when you start to daydream,Your mind turns straight to You.Sometimes I look at you and I look into your eyes,I notice the way you think about You with a smile,Curved lips you just can't disguise.But you think it's Me making your life worthwhile.Why is it so hard for you to decide which you love more?Me or...You? It's just ^this^ repeated again and again, nothing really interesting or attention - grabbing.

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