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My song, help me out!
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XxEmilyxTHxX
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Posted : Wed Aug 27 19:53:07 2008

Hey, tell me what you think!
Ideas, stuff that needs fixing, ratings 1-10, 10 being the best.
It's not done, so if any of you have some ideas I could use I'd love you forever!
So yeah, here it is, give me ideas and ratings =]]

*VERSE 1*I knew right from the start
You're the one who took my heart
I forgot it was all a stupid little game
Now you're gone and feel no shame
There's no turning back
Everything is so black
There's no changing the past
I guess we went too fast*

CHORUSNothing feels like it did
There's many feelings I have hid
Without you there's nothing
Without you there's nothing
It was a moment of weakness
A moment you were so carelessCHORUS

*VERSE 2*Oh I gave it all up for you
In the end what was I suppose to do?
You blame me for your mistake
How much more of this can I take?
I won't apologize, it would only be a lie
I cared so much for you now I hope you die
You're like a nightmare I wish I could wake up
You use to be someone I could look up to*

*CHORUS*

*BRIDGE*It still feels like it did
There's many feelings I have hid
Without you there's nothing
Without you there's nothing*BRIDGE*

*VERSE 3*

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