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This is a bit of a forum game, but at the same time it has the capacity to result in a bit of poetry, so it goes here. I'm going to supply a line of poetry, and the following poster is to create a poem using the line I gave as their first. Along with their poem, they supply a line for the next person to write poetry on. No restrictions on the type of line or poetry; just keep the line open ended.

Here's the first line:

Here lies a man with heart so full.

Kelly


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life and death is in gods hand;
everything will be vanished with sand,
this condolence is only a formality;
there is no love in reality.

people shall soon see the reality;
no body cares anybody's values of morality,
i feel i am the only one who sees;
the silence,the tears and the darkness of seas.

this is my poetry hows it smile


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he isn't convinced with the things going on,
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some one complete it ha! 


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Here lies a man with heart so full.
Here LIES A MAN WITH HEART SO FULL
He loved each day he spent with her.
His face was cast with powerful smile
as he awoke to her face, each day in denial.
'How could a woman full of such beauty,
be with this man without such purity?
Your face could stop the wind from howling,
destract the devil from constant scowling.
Within your eyes; perfect perfection,
More pure than love be your affection.'
With praise he worshiped as a goddess,
till one day he died with such proudness.
No one could see what had caused his pass,
until found poison in his glass.


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OH thats awesome and Im crops at writing poetry but Im gonna try Frustrated

Here lies a man with heart so full.
Always happy and  never dull
The day she walked into his life
He knew one day she would be his wife

They dated for three years
They never fought, there was never tears
Then one day he had tears in his eyes
His face contorted she thought he was going to die

"Why are you sad?' she said 
'Your the one I want to wed'
He continued "all I want is you'
'Yes' she said blushing too

And now their children have all grown
They wonder how the time has flown
Their life is never dull
Both have hearts that are full 

Blush 

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good try instead ...... smile


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here lies the man with heart so full;
he is not convinced with the things going ill.
he don't want the world to know his fears;
because his heart is so full with tears.


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Because His Heart Is So Full With Tears.

Tears of blood fall from my broken heart
I never thought we would be apart

When you held me you said "forever"
Now that you're gone I know you meant "never"

Saying you love me with that look in your eye
And that was a cold hearted lie

Your tender touch, a soft kiss
Two things about you I will miss

As I sit here thinking about you
My face is wet with tears past due

I should've cried a long time ago
But I loved you so

I know they say love is blind
But I had only you on my mind

A hurt so deep it cuts like a knife
But wounds heal and I'll go on with my life

Kelly


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hmmmm nice one smile


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Thnx

Kelly


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