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Posted over 4 years ago
Not a huge poem writer, I prefer short stories... But heres two poems I wrote smile

 

For she does not know:           As she sits on the bed

With a thousand words swirling in her head

She glances at the ground and wonders...

How?

How did it happen?

How did I get here?

What did I do to deserve this?

She knows the answer to each question,

But lies to herself, just like everyone else.

Holding a Mirror

Fulled with fear.

She doesn't know what to do anymore.

She was never this insecure.

But after going through what she's been through

She doesn't know what to belive.

She thinks

"Was it you?"

"Was it me?"

"Perhaps, it was all just a dream."

As she glances in the mirror,

and trys to look past the fear.

All she sees is a girl screaming and pleading

For now she knows what she has done.

Now the race has just begun,

But the timer has already rung.

With her heart beating a thousand beats

She runs and screams "Oh dear, forgive me please"

The faster she goes,

The closer she gets,

To the abyss of all her regrets.

For she has discovered what shes done.

But her consequence it still to come.

Running on a path to a place so cold,

For she does not know

What awaits before her.

 

 

As we walk in the sand

Hand in hand      

A million things on our mind.

For yesterday we saw you.

But today or tomorrow we won't

For tonight we cry,

as we sit and think,

of what we could've done.

Without you by our sides

We seem to be failing life.

It could've been me,

instead of you.

Or anyone else, true.

But I guess it's time to realize.

Everything will be fine.

Just know one thing.

We will forever miss you,

being at our sides

And helping us through the obstacles

of life.

Our sides:

 

 



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Posted over 4 years ago
As we walk in the sand, is the second poem titled Our sides.

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Posted over 4 years ago
Anyone gonna tell meh what they think? Lol c'mon.

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Posted over 4 years ago
It's nice.  I don't know much about poetry, but it was entertaining enough to get me to read the whole post  Wink

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Posted over 4 years ago
Haha truth is, I dunno anything about poetry either. Lol. Thanks for answering me tho (:

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Posted over 4 years ago
Wows.. I completely forgot I wrote this lol

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Posted over 4 years ago
I think you should work on your spacing (lol) it is a really good poem, a bit of a mouthful though, try making it shorter and more... understandable,(leaving less spaces, joining more lines)

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Posted over 4 years ago
Awesome poem I love it Big Grin


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Posted over 4 years ago

"poetrychick" wrote:

I think you should work on your spacing (lol) it is a really good poem, a bit of a mouthful though, try making it shorter and more... understandable,(leaving less spaces, joining more lines)

Lol okay. And I can't right anything short, it ends up sounding like a kindergarden poem lol xD But thank you (:

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Posted over 4 years ago
Short poems don't have to sound like kindergarden poems! Watch:

Separation
Separation is a cruelty, a sinful trait,
Created by those, who love to hate,
 But many more things in life involve togetherness,
Many things, that are such harm or such bliss,
Democracy, freedom, war, federation,
Tell me, please, what is gained by separation?
But let me tell you, the answer of youth,
What is gained by separation? Truth.
The truth that life was woven together,
Sun and dark, a rock a feather,
Big and thin, heavy and light,
And most of all- black and white.

This is a relatively short poem I would say! smile Wink

When someone dies....

....A new life begins


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