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Immabeme11
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"poetrychick" wrote:

Short poems don't have to sound like kindergarden poems! Watch:

Separation

Separation is a cruelty, a sinful trait,

Created by those, who love to hate,

But many more things in life involve togetherness,

Many things, that are such harm or such bliss,

Democracy, freedom, war, federation,

Tell me, please, what is gained by separation?

But let me tell you, the answer of youth,

What is gained by separation? Truth.

The truth that life was woven together,

Sun and dark, a rock a feather,

Big and thin, heavy and light,

And most of all- black and white.

This is a relatively short poem I would say! smile

Haha I know, But I prefer longer poems. Like I said earlier I'm not a Huge poetry writer I prefer righting stories over writing poems

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Wells I got bored, so I tried to make a short one. I dunno how it came out tho. Here it is.

Love

You are my soul, my everything
For when I hear your voice
My world stops,
My heart skips a beat
and my eyes shine brighter than ever before.
Being with you, is like a dream.
And my thoughts of you, are always sweet.
Your like a mist, Of happiness
You make me think reality
is but a dream. So let me tell you this,
My heart, is in your hands
My soul, is yours to keep
Trust, I have in you
Hope, I have for us
And Love, is what this is.

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Immabeme11
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"Immabeme11" wrote:

Wells I got bored, so I tried to make a short one. I dunno how it came out tho. Here it is.

Love

You are my soul, my everything

For when I hear your voice

My world stops,

My heart skips a beat

and my eyes shine brighter than ever before.

Being with you, is like a dream.

And my thoughts of you, are always sweet.

Your like a mist, Of happiness

You make me think realityt (:

is but a dream. So let me tell you this,

My heart, is in your hands

My soul, is yours to keep

Trust, I have in you

Hope, I have for us

And Love, is what this is.

I'd appreciate it if someone told me what they thought of it {:

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Immabeme11
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Anyone? Lol

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Once their was a woman who was the most beautiful woman in the world and she had 3 children and this man was the most handsome man in the world so the woman went to the man and asked him do you want to go out and the man said no because she had 3 children so the woman took the kids and killed the 3 children in the stream and she went back the next day and asked again he said no i cant marry or go out on a date with a woman who kills her own kids so the woman went to the stream and killed herself THE END

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Ulani M

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gunman98
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"Immabeme11" wrote:

Anyone? Lol
I must say that that one is a definite improvement over the last one. I enjoyed it and don't think it sounds like a kindergarten poem Wink

Keep up the good work!

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