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I cry

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This goes out to the little Angels,
This goes out to the heroes,
Who died
Who survived

I cry  thinking of what they went through
Thinking of the tears shed
Thinking of the pain spread.
I cry myself to sleep Wondering if there is something I could have done
If there is something I could say
To help them make it through the day
I cry thinking about the 20 little lives lost
and the pain, sorrow, and hurt it cost.
I cry wondering why God didn't stop this from happening
Why God is letting these innocent children die?
These hurting people cry?

I cry thinking of how i have taken life for granted
I cry praying for a better day; when these parents and family can see their relatives face to face. 

I cry thinking of the lost man, Adam Lanza; there are now 27 lost people.
 


Leaving KW! Love all of my friends! KW has been so good to me these past years! To all of my best friends: You'll know to still have hope for our relationships!
Love you all! ♥


I cry

Posted By:
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CrashYourParty
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January, 2012
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Posts: 1667

"CrashYourParty" wrote:


This goes out to the little Angels,

This goes out to the heroes,

Who died

Who survived


I cry  thinking of what they went through

Thinking of the tears shed

Thinking of the pain spread.

I cry myself to sleep Wondering if there is something I could have done

If there is something I could say

To help them make it through the day

I cry thinking about the 20 little lives lost

and the pain, sorrow, and hurt it cost.

I cry wondering why God didn't stop this from happening

Why God is letting these innocent children die?

These hurting people cry?



I cry thinking of how i have taken life for granted

I cry praying for a better day; when these parents and family can see their relatives face to face. 



I cry thinking of the lost man, Adam Lanza; there are now 27 lost people.

 


Leaving KW! Love all of my friends! KW has been so good to me these past years! To all of my best friends: You'll know to still have hope for our relationships!
Love you all! ♥


I cry

Posted By:
poetrychick
poetrychick
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December, 2012
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Oh wow my friend, your poem really touched my heart and threatened to bring on the waterworks, I really am moved by the words and how they weaved together in your poetry, I really am.
Check out some of my poems on the forum posts, get some ideas from there!

You have a talent, a really good one and rare one. Not many can reach the level of poetic power that you have, you have that special talent, Do NOT waste it.

I realized that you were refering to the shootout at the primary school, hey? That made me cry literally. And a week before Christmas... 
That poor guy who shot those kids must have been emotionally ruined, seriously. I mean, if you see someone killled or hurt that is bound to leave a scar, a mark emotionally.

My guess is that mark never healed.


When someone dies....

....A new life begins


I cry

Posted By:
CrashYourParty Lock
CrashYourParty
Member since:
January, 2012
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Status: Offline
Posts: 1667

"CrashYourParty" wrote:


"CrashYourParty" wrote:





This goes out to the little Angels,



This goes out to the heroes,



Who died



Who survived




I cry  thinking of what they went through



Thinking of the tears shed



Thinking of the pain spread.



I cry myself to sleep Wondering if there is something I could have done



If there is something I could say



To help them make it through the day



I cry thinking about the 20 little lives lost



and the pain, sorrow, and hurt it cost.



I cry wondering why God didn't stop this from happening



Why God is letting these innocent children die?



These hurting people cry?







I cry thinking of how i have taken life for granted



I cry praying for a better day; when these parents and family can see their relatives face to face. 







I cry thinking of the lost man, Adam Lanza; there are now 27 lost people.



 


Leaving KW! Love all of my friends! KW has been so good to me these past years! To all of my best friends: You'll know to still have hope for our relationships!
Love you all! ♥


I cry

Posted By:
CrashYourParty Lock
CrashYourParty
Member since:
January, 2012
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Status: Offline
Posts: 1667

"poetrychick" wrote:

Oh wow my friend, your poem really touched my heart and threatened to bring on the waterworks, I really am moved by the words and how they weaved together in your poetry, I really am.

Check out some of my poems on the forum posts, get some ideas from there!



You have a talent, a really good one and rare one. Not many can reach the level of poetic power that you have, you have that special talent, Do NOT waste it.



I realized that you were refering to the shootout at the primary school, hey? That made me cry literally. And a week before Christmas... 

That poor guy who shot those kids must have been emotionally ruined, seriously. I mean, if you see someone killled or hurt that is bound to leave a scar, a mark emotionally.



My guess is that mark never healed.



Thank you so! Much that is actually the first poem I have ever written; Thanks so much! I'm definitely going to write more! And I will most definitely check out your poems.
The shootout was so sad and I was crying last night thinking of that so I wrote this. thanks for reading and I will read yours!

Leaving KW! Love all of my friends! KW has been so good to me these past years! To all of my best friends: You'll know to still have hope for our relationships!
Love you all! ♥


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