Alice and a twisted tale

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vanillacupcake454
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my mothers car drove away.the gas was spilling, running up my nostrils through my lungs and causing me to cough up a storm. turning away i walked toward the marble mansion. mansion wasn't big enough to describe how big this palace was. i was beginning to feel scared. soon i was quickening my pace freaking out. teens were gathered everywhere and i held onto my bags. surprisingly the lobby was quite small for a ginormous place for this. it was hot and stuffy and i longed for a sweet drink. a woman ,guessing the head of this palace, stood on a table. her attempt to make us see her wasn't very smart at all. her eyes were a dark red , her hair was placed in a small neat,black bun.her face was pointed reminding me of a rat. "Attentions!! " she poked at the microphone."Im so glad all of you wonderful and talented children have took the time to come here. yes rules of course you may not use your powers outside of this palace"powers!!
((i have to go good night i'll write more tomorrow)).

curiousity
OMG. true story time. ok so you know those breath sprays that people use in the movies before someone is about to kiss someone. well i thought it was perfume they used. and i tried it when i was smaller , AND IT TASTED REALLY BAD
-YourArgumentIsInvalid
what a funny dude

Alice and a twisted tale

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vanillacupcake454
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"im so glad all of you wonderful and talented children have took the time to come here.yes rules of course you may not use your powers outside off this palace"

powers?? my hands began to sweat as i held onto my duffel bag harder. "your powers may not be used for any bad doings. they may be hard for some of you" she squinted her eyes at us and began to talk once more. "you all will be handed a small folder with your form number and another set of rules" she pursed her lips staring at a small fat man. he gave a weak smile and pretended to be interested in his white gloves."since there are more people than usual we wont be having our own dorms. ok, there includes who your dorm member will be." she clasped her hands "gather into a,line please!!"

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curiousity
OMG. true story time. ok so you know those breath sprays that people use in the movies before someone is about to kiss someone. well i thought it was perfume they used. and i tried it when i was smaller , AND IT TASTED REALLY BAD
-YourArgumentIsInvalid
what a funny dude

Alice and a twisted tale

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Pplperson
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Really good

Don't follow your dreams; Chase them

Alice and a twisted tale

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vanillacupcake454
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thank you im planning on writting more but i have no ideas could you input?

curiousity
OMG. true story time. ok so you know those breath sprays that people use in the movies before someone is about to kiss someone. well i thought it was perfume they used. and i tried it when i was smaller , AND IT TASTED REALLY BAD
-YourArgumentIsInvalid
what a funny dude

Alice and a twisted tale

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Pplperson
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Well it say speicies vampire so maybe when they marrie the husbands could be vampires and turn them hope this helps alittle

Don't follow your dreams; Chase them

Alice and a twisted tale

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vanillacupcake454
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what? where? what are you talking about

curiousity
OMG. true story time. ok so you know those breath sprays that people use in the movies before someone is about to kiss someone. well i thought it was perfume they used. and i tried it when i was smaller , AND IT TASTED REALLY BAD
-YourArgumentIsInvalid
what a funny dude