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Do You Really Want To Go There

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Hi this is a song I'm writing I dont know if I should go with it or not plz tell me and or rate it or something smile
 
So do you really want to go there, to the uncharted places of me.
Because you are half way there and dont you see
I dont know whats going to happen to me~
If you blow that fuse and set me off like a bomb
So do you-Really want to go-o-o to the uncharted places of me~
Oh you dont want to go beacause its only gonna cause hurt

If you like it and have an idea for the rest I would love to hear it

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Do You Really Want To Go There

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trueblood32
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what i think is you need to try a whole bunch of different melodys and see witch one is the best but i think it is good and you need to add more rhymes in the song pplperson and im telling you the truth because you are my best friend but dont scream at me and if you do i will say myob

Do You Really Want To Go There

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XxCooldudexX
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i like it!!!!!  smile  Wink

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