Hi I'm Pplerson and I like to write songs but I've never had much hope on here but I'm going to try again and see if anyone likes it and if you have any ideas on the rest of it because it's not done I'd love to hear them.

What am I supposed to do
When I think about you
Am I supposed to cry
All day and every night
Now I know I broke up with you
But now I don't know what to do
When I think about you
And I think I just need a chance
To be the best that can
Without you looking over my shoulder
Like a captain souldier
Waiting for me to mess up
So you can bring up
All my flaws you thought I missed

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7/10

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"vanillacupcake454" wrote:

7/10

Thanks I'm working on it got any ideas?

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thats actully good! 9/10

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"ice cream girl" wrote:

thats actully good! 9/10

Thanks can you beliave one of my friends gave  it a 6!

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"Pplperson" wrote:

"ice cream girl" wrote:

thats actully good! 9/10

Thanks can you beliave one of my friends gave  it a 6!

lol ;3

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How bout this next

When I first tried to get away you pulled me back in by the wrist

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 Okay I added a litlle bit on to it so here it is(Still not finished though)

What am I supposed to do
When I think about you
Am I supposed to cry
All day and night
Now I know I broke up with you
But now I don't know what to do
I think I just need a chance
To be the best that I can
Without you looking over my shoulder
Like a commanding soldier
Waiting for me to mess up
Just so you can bring up
All my flaws you think I missed
And I remember the first time I tried to go you grabbed by the wrist
And did not let goooooo
Then you pulled me innnnn
But not this time
You'll be asking me why
But you know
You know
You knooooowwww
You know what you did
To get what you get   :P

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Its okay 4/10

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