Okay, I know this poem I wrote is rubbish, but I would still appreciate comments, whether it's criticism or compliments. Also, I wrote it in under twenty minutes so I didn't dedicate a lot of time ...
I dream that one day magic shall pass before my eyes.
Whether it be a friend, or even a vampire,
I hope that dream never dies.
I want to grow wings and soar over a mountain.
I want to gain superpowers and abilities.
I want to swim in every ocean and fountain.
I want to dream of all the possibilities.
I will let my spirit soar,
Overcoming everything in my path.
Despite the obstacles in my way,
I will just live, love and laugh.
My dreams are my goals.
My light at the end of the tunnel.
Just like all the other souls,
I shall find my beloved future.
I have an unquenched thirst to run at the speed of light.
An unquenched thirst to leap in the air and take flight.
Our dreams are our futures,
We simply have to try,
For anything is possible,
Your dreams will never die.
But also pigs and horses, and basically everything that isn't human.
Humans betray, lie and cheat; they kill for sport and break hearts.
I am a proud alien.