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How To Lie To Everyone ~ Season 1 ~

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~ E P I S O D E 1 ~
" White Lies "

Hannah Crossed her arms as her sister, Mavis was putting out the furniture.
"Will You be don anytime soon?" She asked.
"I could do it faster if you would help me!" Mavis said through her teeth, Pulling the sofa into place
"Not Going to happen" Hannah Laughed.
"Look, I'm going into town, you can continue with this" She said, And before Mavis could say anything, She slammed the door behind her.
"If Mum wasn't in Iraq, I would get Hannah Grounded before she could put on another coating of lipstick" Mavis said coldly as she looked at Hannah through the window.
Hannah was walking and admiring herself in a mirror when she rashed into somebody.
"woah!" came a deep voice from just in front of her. Hannah's mirror went flying into the road, and a car drove over it, smashing the glass.
"I'm So sorry Ma'm" Came the voice again. A man stood up then helped Hannah back to standing position. Hannah Flipped her velvety Maroon hair and looked up at the man. He had brown woody eyes, and a nice, kindly face.
"I'm sorry about your clothes, they must have cost thousands". In truth, each piece had only cost around 5 pounds each.
"This shirt cost almost 9 actually". Her clothes indeed looked very expensive, but were truthully cheap knock offs, Realistic ones.
"Woah, You must be rich!" Said the man. "I'm Toby By the way".
"I'm Hannah. Hannah Trinnion". The Trinnions were a famous, filthy rich family who lived in Red Hill, The expensive, Extremley posh, Venue Inhabited only by the richest, most famous people. Hannah was actually, Not a Trinnion, but only people who lived on Red Hill knew The Trinnion family well, so she could tell this one, tiny white lie.
"A Trinnion? Wow! that explains the clothes! It's awesome to meet you! I never knew guys like you visited the mains." Toby Exclaimed.
"Well, You do now, huh? Well, I gotta go".
(Commercial Break)
"Wait, can I get you a new make-up mirror? It was my fault you dropped it onto the road" He asked politley.
"Uh, Nah it's fine, really, I gotta get to, um, Red Hill Plaza" Hannah Made up quickly.
"Oh. Wait, here, I hope 10 pounds is enough for that mirror". Toby handed Hannah a tenner and smiled.
"Actually it was 20, But thanks" Hannah Said. She lingered for a couple of seconds in case Toby offered her another ten, but he just smiled.
"well, I'll see you later" She said, And as she turned to go, Toby said
"I hope so, I live in redhill too!"
(Another commercial break)

I am epic
I am cool
I can't swim in a public pool
what am I?

And yes, I'm an Experienced RolePlayer
And Yes I like Minecraft
And No, I'm not a tomboy because I have TWO GAMES on my PC.
And Yes, I like trains.


How To Lie To Everyone ~ Season 1 ~

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Its so much amazing, Keep it up! Grin


How To Lie To Everyone ~ Season 1 ~

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Thank You Very Much! I'ts based on an old show from the 90's where theres a brother and a sister who are leading lives of lies which are very similar, but they both find out they've gotten themselves in big trouble and help each other out. I'm changing the story line HUGELY though.

I am epic
I am cool
I can't swim in a public pool
what am I?

And yes, I'm an Experienced RolePlayer
And Yes I like Minecraft
And No, I'm not a tomboy because I have TWO GAMES on my PC.
And Yes, I like trains.


How To Lie To Everyone ~ Season 1 ~

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That was really good, I really enjoyed it. Keep up the good work smile!



How To Lie To Everyone ~ Season 1 ~

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"Alexis7343" wrote:

That was really good, I really enjoyed it. Keep up the good work smile!


Thanks, It's always nice to have positive feedback, And I know the literature isn't that great, But I'm working on it.

I am epic
I am cool
I can't swim in a public pool
what am I?

And yes, I'm an Experienced RolePlayer
And Yes I like Minecraft
And No, I'm not a tomboy because I have TWO GAMES on my PC.
And Yes, I like trains.


How To Lie To Everyone ~ Season 1 ~

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LeaMarie(;
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That was intense. Keep it up smile

Totally cute.

This kitten's adorable sorcery will make you yawn.

Stop resisting.

Lea_Marie_K


How To Lie To Everyone ~ Season 1 ~

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Previously, On How To Lie To Everyone....

Hannah Just left to go shopping and resume a life as a normal female would live. She bumps into a complete stranger and manages to lie to him, Only to find out he could tell she's lying just by checking upon next door.


E P I S O D E  2:

"How to Lie To Strangers"

Toby Hadn't been joking. Word had gotten out quickly that two Redhillers had visited the main town. Well, in reality, only one. Hannah was rumored to be one of those "Rich person that preferrs lower scale habitats" Or something. Hannah was cooking a boiled egg in her kitchen when there was a series of quick rings on the doorbell. She walked slowly over to the door and opened it. Her sister Mavis was standing in rain, her arms folded, looking extremley grumpy. She stalked in and grabbed a towel from the bathroom
"Hello to you too, Moody". Hannah went back to the kitchen and prepared the egg. She plopped down on the sofa when suddenly she saw somebody's head poking out, looking through the window. She opened the door again and to her horror, It was Toby.
(Commercial Break)

I am epic
I am cool
I can't swim in a public pool
what am I?

And yes, I'm an Experienced RolePlayer
And Yes I like Minecraft
And No, I'm not a tomboy because I have TWO GAMES on my PC.
And Yes, I like trains.


How To Lie To Everyone ~ Season 1 ~

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cont.

Hannah quickly threw the plate onto the table and ran to the door. She unlatched it and saw Toby, Clearly standing there, Drenched in rain.
"Oh Hey Hannah! Is this you're friend's house or something?" Toby said, still standing at the door, Soaking wet.
'Uh, Yeah, come in, Lemme get you a towel." Hannah said quickly, letting him in and closing the door behind her.
"Thanks, Oh, was this you're breakfast?" He said, Motioning to her smashed Egg on the table.
"Oh, Uh yeah" Hannah said, Not really comprehending what Toby had said. She ran up to the bathroom and grabbed a towel. She sprinted back downstairs but Mavis was already there, talking to Toby.
"So you're Hannah's friend, right?" He said, Carefully placing his soggy shoes next to the others.
"No, Actually I'm her sister, All Hannah's friends are back in Cali" Mavis replied, Cleaning up the mess of egg on the table. Mavis turned her head to the left and saw Hannah at the bottom of the stairs.
"Oh, hey sis" She said, as if it was totally normal for an almost complete stranger to be in their house, talking about Hannah as if they were best friends.
Toby took the towel from Hannah's hands and dried his hair.
"You guys used to live in California? Sweet!". Mavis Smiled proudly and said
"Yeah, We lived in L.A, Hannah used to have a Job at Orlando's but decided She got bored of it and left, Then Mom kicked us out so we bought a flat here, since L.A Flats are SUPER expensive"
Hannah's heart stopped. This was it, The lie hadn't gotten far, and she was about to be sussed out by some guy she met just 24 hours ago.

 


I am epic
I am cool
I can't swim in a public pool
what am I?

And yes, I'm an Experienced RolePlayer
And Yes I like Minecraft
And No, I'm not a tomboy because I have TWO GAMES on my PC.
And Yes, I like trains.


How To Lie To Everyone ~ Season 1 ~

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meow! ^-^

will you still love me, even with my dark side?


How To Lie To Everyone ~ Season 1 ~

Posted By:
-iAwesome-
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Member since:
December, 2012
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got any predictions for ep 3?

I am epic
I am cool
I can't swim in a public pool
what am I?

And yes, I'm an Experienced RolePlayer
And Yes I like Minecraft
And No, I'm not a tomboy because I have TWO GAMES on my PC.
And Yes, I like trains.


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