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the night is quiet my heart begins to race
i'm lost in the wilderness, gone without a trace
it's been two days but it feels like a month with a little amount of food
hoping i have enough
so i wont give up
i'll live long enough because i am a survivor and i, am tough


-Calliforniagirl

i dont have an attitude problem i just have a
personality you cant handle


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its gud i like it but remember to insert the punctuations... plz read mine - Treasure of poems

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KK smile

i dont have an attitude problem i just have a
personality you cant handle


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That's a realllyyy good poem. Survivor is spelled with an "o" Also, I would break up that really long line. Otherwise, absolutely amazingness Big Grin

Totally cute.

This kitten's adorable sorcery will make you yawn.

Stop resisting.

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Thx, i forgot about the "o" in surivor, i want to be a writer so ur compliment helped smile smile

i dont have an attitude problem i just have a
personality you cant handle


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Don't you remember?

dont you remember
the times we had
and how you cheered me up
when i was sad
how you kept me strong
told me i was never wrong
but now all a sudden
those memories are gone
why dont you remember? 
it wasnt long ago
oh yes i remember 
you like to pretend u dont know
     -calliforniagirl

i dont have an attitude problem i just have a
personality you cant handle


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I seriously thought the tittle ment something else, I had a mini heart attack for no reason.
Good poem, though. 


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"xXMCJXx " wrote:

I seriously thought the tittle ment something else, I had a mini heart attack for no reason.

Good poem, though. 

AJ and Lita thenAJ and Lita now
from a fan to an idol, entertainer, a wrestler, a champion.


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Our child

i was only fifteen
and i didnt know
you told me it was cool
that my parents would never know
but now i am pregnant
with our baby boy
but now you back out
saying this isnt how it goes
i feel so alone
so used and neglected 
you told me u loved me
that i would always be protected
im so sorry now that you dont want to be with me
im only fifteen 
now apart of teen pregnancy
         -calliforniagirl

i dont have an attitude problem i just have a
personality you cant handle


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Long distance love

i'm so far away
dont know how this will work
how can we stay together
and your starting to be a jerk
u always made me laugh
with all those jokes you told
now we're far apart
the same jokes i tell myself are getting old
i'm so far away 
dont know how this'll work
maybe it's time to say goodbye
i love you my sweet jerk
         -ceona

i dont have an attitude problem i just have a
personality you cant handle


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