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best.gal. EVER!
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Posted about 3 years ago
Hey guys! I wanted some feedback. I am writing this story about this boy's life but how do I make it interesting? What kind of cliff hangers should I use? what would the readers enjoy? I am in a serious writer's block. HELP ME!!!!!! ( I want to publish it so it has to something GOOD)

I walk in, when everyone walks out. I stay with you, while everyone leaves. I will always be there 4 u!


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Posted about 3 years ago
Well, it depends... Is this a Sci Fi story? A fantasy story? An adventure story? A little bit of each? Something different?

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Posted about 3 years ago
It is well.... realistic fiction. Like Diary of a Wimpy kid but not a diary

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Posted about 3 years ago

"best.gal. EVER!" wrote:

It is well.... realistic fiction. Like Diary of a Wimpy kid but not a diary


Well, let's look at the big picture... Does this boy live a great life? A terrible life? What is his background? What do you want him to be like?

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best.gal. EVER!
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Posted about 3 years ago
Like a normal life, with humor, ups and downs, happiness, a little of everything but mostly humor

I walk in, when everyone walks out. I stay with you, while everyone leaves. I will always be there 4 u!


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Posted about 3 years ago
Ive always wanted to write a story about a girl. In her life, there are two boys that stick out from each other. They are total opposites though, but she takes interest in both. One is a very clean cut guy, while the other is a villainous antagonist (not saying hes a bad guy).

Of course, Ive thought the story plot over to make this less of a cliche love story, and more into a physiological book teaching that there is no difference between right and wrong. Good and bad.

Of course, Im sure if you wanted to use the set up, Im sure you can think of something to make it your own. I have no time to even come to start with writing in general - ironic how i hate reading, and books in that matter.. - But ive always thought itd be interesting to write..

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Posted about 3 years ago
Thank for the tip! I'll consider it!

I walk in, when everyone walks out. I stay with you, while everyone leaves. I will always be there 4 u!


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Posted about 3 years ago

"best.gal. EVER!" wrote:

Like a normal life, with humor, ups and downs, happiness, a little of everything but mostly humor


Alright... Well, if you're just writing about his life, something interesting and drastic should happen... And obviously you don't know what that is yet. So tell me, what's his life like? I know you said "normal", but can you be more specific? You could probably create a scenario in his life better if you knew the character more.

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Posted about 3 years ago
Add me, I have to go. I'll let you know tomorrow though

I walk in, when everyone walks out. I stay with you, while everyone leaves. I will always be there 4 u!


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best.gal. EVER!
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Posted about 3 years ago
Well.... I don't know what that scenario is yet. I need help! In a writer's block, its like your brain is stuck.

I walk in, when everyone walks out. I stay with you, while everyone leaves. I will always be there 4 u!


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