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No Pain i will show

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shamae313
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February, 2013
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The pain that I feel, never seen in my eyes.

Hidden too well behind a disguise.
 
Why do I care, what it is that you see?
 
I am who I am, not who you want me to be.
 
My life can be hard but I do what I can.
 
And if I should cry, am I less of a woman?
 
Because I feel heartache, you tell me I’m weak.
 
Why can’t you offer the comfort I seek?
 
I don’t need to fix all the problems I face;
 
only some sympathy and a loved one’s embrace.
 
Why can’t I show it? Why do I hide my pain?
 
I don’t understand it, what is there to gain?
 
My happy exterior is not always real.
 
I wear it to hide any pain that I feel.
 
And still I will wear it, as long as I’m here.
 
For showing my sadness is my only true fear.
 

* Love is a gift u should cherish *


No Pain i will show

Posted By:
NachozRule Lock
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March, 2010
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"shamae313" wrote:

The pain that I feel, never seen in my eyes.

Hidden too well behind a disguise.
 
Why do I care, what it is that you see?
 
I am who I am, not who you want me to be.
 
My life can be hard but I do what I can.
 
And if I should cry, am I less of a man?
 
Because I feel heartache, you tell me I’m weak.
 
Why can’t you offer the comfort I seek?
 
I don’t need to fix all the problems I face;
 
only some sympathy and a loved one’s embrace.
 
Why can’t I show it? Why do I hide my pain?
 
I don’t understand it, what is there to gain?
 
My happy exterior is not always real.
 
I wear it to hide any pain that I feel.
 
And still I will wear it, as long as I’m here.
 
For showing my sadness is my only true fear.
 

Nice poem, might wanna fix the lines into stanzas though.

H3H3H3H3 >:]


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