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Hell Bound (poem.. might be dark for younger people))

Posted By:
Awkwarddd
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February, 2013
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Losing my head
To the monsters within me
Banging on the cage of my ribs
And finally they break free

I'm spiraling down
Into my own bloody pit of despair
Getting closer and closer
To the demons lair

I scream "Let me out!"
But to no avail
I rot in my cell
Growing weak and frail

Crying for help
When no one hears a sound
Trapped inside my own mind
And I know
I am hell bound


Hell Bound (poem.. might be dark for younger people))

Posted By:
lemonadewithbrownies
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May, 2012
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"Awkwarddd" wrote:

Losing my head

To the monsters within me

Banging on the cage of my ribs

And finally they break free


I'm spiraling down

Into my own bloody pit of despair

Getting closer and closer

To the demons lair


I scream "Let me out!"

But to no avail

I rot in my cell

Growing weak and frail


Crying for help

When no one hears a sound

Trapped inside my own mind

And I know

I am hell bound

its really good,it expresses your feelings well,i notice that you have some rhyme in their and it sorta has a deep meaning in it

I live in america and I love anime.Here's what I wanna say to you : BLUE CHICKENS AND MONKEYS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Toriko
One of my favorite animes
toriko


Hell Bound (poem.. might be dark for younger people))

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PretentiousSmile
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May, 2013
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Wow! This is really dark! But I love it! Thanks for sharing this amazing piece of work! Big Grin

Obtuse, rubber goose, green moose, guava juice, giant snake, birthday cake, large fries, chocolate shake!


Hell Bound (poem.. might be dark for younger people))

Posted By:
Awkwarddd
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February, 2013
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Big Grin thanks to both of you! This is the first poem I've shared on KW and its nice to get some positive feedback


Hell Bound (poem.. might be dark for younger people))

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PretentiousSmile
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You're welcome!

Obtuse, rubber goose, green moose, guava juice, giant snake, birthday cake, large fries, chocolate shake!


Hell Bound (poem.. might be dark for younger people))

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whatdaheck
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May, 2013
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Scary cool poetry ;D


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Hell Bound (poem.. might be dark for younger people))

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Scourgeheart
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Awesom! Big Grin

Love thy neighbor as thyself
Huge Alicia

Jase and Etrigan
Cain

When I enter a party v v v

Everyone is beautiful, special, and has a purpose in this world. Yes, even you


Hell Bound (poem.. might be dark for younger people))

Posted By:
Awkwarddd
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February, 2013
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Thanks everyone! Blush


Hell Bound (poem.. might be dark for younger people))

Posted By:
lemonadewithbrownies
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May, 2012
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youre welcome,i encourage you to keep writing poetry

I live in america and I love anime.Here's what I wanna say to you : BLUE CHICKENS AND MONKEYS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Toriko
One of my favorite animes
toriko


Hell Bound (poem.. might be dark for younger people))

Posted By:
melissawolf
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April, 2013
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great

Shaywolf
love you all


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