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Awkwarddd
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StarStarStarStar
Posted about 3 years ago
Losing my head
To the monsters within me
Banging on the cage of my ribs
And finally they break free

I'm spiraling down
Into my own bloody pit of despair
Getting closer and closer
To the demons lair

I scream "Let me out!"
But to no avail
I rot in my cell
Growing weak and frail

Crying for help
When no one hears a sound
Trapped inside my own mind
And I know
I am hell bound


Posted By:
lemonadewithbrownies
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StarStarStarStar
Posted about 3 years ago

"Awkwarddd" wrote:

Losing my head

To the monsters within me

Banging on the cage of my ribs

And finally they break free


I'm spiraling down

Into my own bloody pit of despair

Getting closer and closer

To the demons lair


I scream "Let me out!"

But to no avail

I rot in my cell

Growing weak and frail


Crying for help

When no one hears a sound

Trapped inside my own mind

And I know

I am hell bound

its really good,it expresses your feelings well,i notice that you have some rhyme in their and it sorta has a deep meaning in it

I live in America and I love anime.Here's what I wanna say to you : BLUE CHICKENS AND MONKEYS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Toriko
One of my favorite animes
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PretentiousSmile
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StarStarStarStar
Posted about 3 years ago
Wow! This is really dark! But I love it! Thanks for sharing this amazing piece of work! Big Grin

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Posted By:
Awkwarddd
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StarStarStarStar
Posted about 3 years ago
Big Grin thanks to both of you! This is the first poem I've shared on KW and its nice to get some positive feedback


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Posted about 3 years ago
You're welcome!

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StarStarStarStar
Posted about 3 years ago
Scary cool poetry ;D

cue, evil grin...mwahaha


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Posted about 3 years ago
Awesom! Big Grin

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Awkwarddd
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StarStarStarStar
Posted about 3 years ago
Thanks everyone! Blush


Posted By:
lemonadewithbrownies
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StarStarStarStar
Posted about 3 years ago
youre welcome,i encourage you to keep writing poetry

I live in America and I love anime.Here's what I wanna say to you : BLUE CHICKENS AND MONKEYS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Toriko
One of my favorite animes
toriko


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Posted about 3 years ago
great

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