Don't you just love lime? ericks?

post dem here.

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"lemonadewithbrownies" wrote:

i have a poem in one of my recent forum posts,its probably not a limerick,but id like someone to read it and give me feedback,so please.....

This wasn't a forum for ads.
Oh and its okay.

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"NachozRule" wrote:

"lemonadewithbrownies" wrote:

i have a poem in one of my recent forum posts,its probably not a limerick,but id like someone to read it and give me feedback,so please.....

This wasn't a forum for ads.
Oh and its okay.

i'm srry,im just desperate for someone to read it,so i know what to do with it to improve it,i could make a limerick really quick and post it for you to make it up to you

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ok,here it is,im warning you,its not that good
"Mystical Land of Treats"
There once was a magical land
It had a candy strand
           Filled with treats
           Not with meat
Look,there's the Candyman

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