Limericks

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NachozRule
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March, 2010

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Don't you just love lime? ericks?

post dem here.

H3H3H3H3 >:]

Limericks

Posted By:

NachozRule
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"lemonadewithbrownies" wrote:
i have a poem in one of my recent forum posts,its probably not a limerick,but id like someone to read it and give me feedback,so please.....

This wasn't a forum for ads.
Oh and its okay.

H3H3H3H3 >:]

Limericks

Posted By:

lemonadewithbrownies
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May, 2012

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"NachozRule" wrote:

"lemonadewithbrownies" wrote:

i have a poem in one of my recent forum posts,its probably not a limerick,but id like someone to read it and give me feedback,so please.....

This wasn't a forum for ads.
Oh and its okay.

i'm srry,im just desperate for someone to read it,so i know what to do with it to improve it,i could make a limerick really quick and post it for you to make it up to you

I live in america and I love anime.Here's what I wanna say to you : BLUE CHICKENS AND MONKEYS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Toriko
One of my favorite animes
toriko

Limericks

Posted By:

lemonadewithbrownies
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May, 2012

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Posts: 294

ok,here it is,im warning you,its not that good
"Mystical Land of Treats"
There once was a magical land
It had a candy strand
Filled with treats
Not with meat
Look,there's the Candyman

I live in america and I love anime.Here's what I wanna say to you : BLUE CHICKENS AND MONKEYS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Toriko
One of my favorite animes
toriko