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HyperTails
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Posted about 3 years ago
    Jack went flying to the elder, but the elder smack him into a wall. Jack got up and went back flying to the elder."Why are you doing this!?" he asked the elder. "Because this island is a dumb place to rule, so I'm going to destroy it and be ruler of the world." he said when he was laughing. That just made Jack angry. He dash to the elder but the elder ate him alive. "Jack!!!!!!" Julie yelled out. "This is so gross!" Jack said.


   He keep punching the elder's gut, but nothing happened. "Nice try, but my gut is made out of steel." he said. Jack is trying to break nothing's working. He started to breathing heavy, and noticed that fire is coming out of his mouth. Jack said, "That's it!" Jack started to use his fire breath to melt the gut of steel. "No, no, no!!!!!" the elder yelled out as his gut was melting. Fire was coming out the body of the elder. The elder fell down hard. Jack managed to escape. "Jack!!" Julie yelled out, and hugged him hard. Jack transformed back to his normal self. They went to the center, and Jack yelled out, "Everyone on South Island! The elder was using all of us to get the power of the seven Chaos Emeralds. I had to battle him, and i defeated him. Peace is back at South Island!" Jack said as the crowd cheer. Everything went back to normal on South Island, and a new elder was chosen, and everything change.


                                                                            The End! 

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Posted about 3 years ago
You made so many threads while you could have made all the passages in one thread. Oh yeah,when a new person speaks that is a new paragraph. That would make people think that the same person as before kept speaking.


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HyperTails
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Posted about 3 years ago
U guys just hate my stories!!! Mad

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Posted about 3 years ago


"HyperTails" wrote:


U guys just hate my stories!!! Mad

no, I said I hated your writing style, lol. 

H3H3H3H3 >:]


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Posted about 3 years ago
It still means that u hate the whole thing. It took me a whole month 2 make the whole thing!!!!!!! Mad

Hey I'm HyperTails! I'm a Sonic The Hedgehog fan. I also like WWE and Dragon Ball Z!

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Posted about 3 years ago

"HyperTails" wrote:

It still means that u hate the whole thing. It took me a whole month 2 make the whole thing!!!!!!! Mad

No, it doesn't.

H3H3H3H3 >:]


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Posted about 3 years ago
How?! Angry

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