one day their was a girl she was walking home from school she always saw weird things like hands or ghosts any way she was walking home she was almost home till a ghost walk past her 3 more blocks to go when she was only 1 more block from home she look up in the sky and she saw a butterfly she said to her self it is to early in the season  for them and she was right it was only the end of winter and their was a hint of cold in the air still she found it vary weird so she just ran home she told her parents about it but they did not believe her like always but for the rest of her life she always saw that butterfly.

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I think you have a good idea going but a story can't be written in one long sentence.

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