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It Won't Go Away

Posted By:
Imperfect_Me
Imperfect_Me
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June, 2013
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u may c mi pain
but can you feel it 
the tears i shed over u 
as my heart is slowly beating
the memories of us 
playing in mi head 
simply wont fade away
that laugh of your pressed on repeat haunting with is neverending sound
seeing u wit sumone else is killing me deep inside 
the pain i feel as making new memories wit her laughing wit her and being wit her 
yeah u c my pain but only i feel it

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It Won't Go Away

Posted By:
Kirsteeeeen
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June, 2013
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This is really good, but you should use proper grammar so it's more readable. 

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It Won't Go Away

Posted By:
hugebear
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I like it smile 

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It Won't Go Away

Posted By:
Imperfect_Me
Imperfect_Me
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June, 2013
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"Kirsteeeeen" wrote:

This is really good, but you should use proper grammar so it's more readable. 


Thanks and next time I'll make sure I use correct grammar.I had wrote it the way I text my bad. 

Freely expressing my opinions is what I do and making you mad is a plus


It Won't Go Away

Posted By:
Imperfect_Me
Imperfect_Me
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June, 2013
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Posts: 24

"hugebear" wrote:

I like it smile 


Thanks

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