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I dont know what too call it...
I wrote this last year
What do you think? 


Porcelain frames of wire and snow
weeping faces of the unknown
Crimson pours through every crevice
The release seems to be full of menace
Barbed wire at every entrance 
Rejection is endless
Souls are searching for the light
 searching with all their might
But they shall fail as the light is not there
No one does really care
The light is a figment of their imagination
They live in a world of their hallucination
They are blind to darkness that engulfs this world
Or the damaged in the shadows curled
Shadows beckoning in the air
Voices screaming in my ear
Death cutting throats and wrists
In the heart, the blade of death twists
Fragments of my mind drip away
The darkness is always here to stay
Insanity becomes my reality
Soon, it will be a fatality. 

So say a benediction
For a new addiction
In voyeuristic overdrive
A new manipulation
Oversaturation
Take advantage of what you deny


Posted over 4 years ago

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Wow o.o
This is REALLY good omg



Posted over 4 years ago

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this amazing I could never put something this great together Big Grin

|-/ only some will understand


Posted over 4 years ago

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awee thanks guys! it just like... came out of me. like i just started writing the things i was feeling.

So say a benediction
For a new addiction
In voyeuristic overdrive
A new manipulation
Oversaturation
Take advantage of what you deny


Posted over 4 years ago

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July 2011
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Great poem! I like how it rhymed.:3


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"membershipgirl" wrote:

Great poem! I like how it rhymed.:3

Jag och min valp, Elvis
Me and my pup Elvis [ whispers ] I woke him up to do this c:


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