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Children In the Dark. sample of the book i wrote

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rhonick
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I only had time to fine what was needed at the time i didnt have time to look back. But these noises in the closet and in the basement is very creepy like a pipe twirling and breaking into metal. But the voices is the scary part. Its been hunting ever sense i was little . I knew being in this house was a bad idea. I couldnt just leave at the time i did it for my sister. Ever sense our parents died we been looking for a new place to live. I didnt want us going to a new family i just wanted her safe. But when we start to live in the house it was peaceful but when night came thats when everything goes down. Doors open and close,scratches on the wall,shadows,laughter of a child,chattering. But one day. It was dark and quiet just like any other night with a crescent moon a little chilly but just the right temperature. I heard voices like a little girl coming from my sis room. So i just thought it was my sister. So i walk slowly to my sis room quietly then i open the door slowly. As i went in i saw nothing but little sister there sleeping. So i went over there to her and check on her but she was like asleep a little snoaring thats lol. But when i look at the corner theres a little girl crying and saying i cant find my mommy. I was scared to death i had no choice but to go and see if she is real but as soon as i walk slowly she just like flashes by me out into the hall. Then the door shuts hard and fast. Well thats it for the sample comment if you want the full version. 



Children In the Dark. sample of the book i wrote

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rhonick
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How i came up with this? Well it was like i was sitting alone in my house thinking of scary stories so i said why dont i make one. So i did.but this story is kinda real.to my life.



Children In the Dark. sample of the book i wrote

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Its suppose to be a sary story. But it takes a lot of effort to write.



Children In the Dark. sample of the book i wrote

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This is awesome! You should definitely post the full version!

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Children In the Dark. sample of the book i wrote

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rhonick
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"GawjussGracieex" wrote:

This is awesome! You should definitely post the full version!

​Okay Gracie for you bff. Its gonna take forever! Lol



Children In the Dark. sample of the book i wrote

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Hey, its a decent story, you should keep on writing. I'm a writer and I know that it takes  forever. Someof your stories can hold your heart, don't be afraid. Writ More smile  Wink

Unicorns will be real if you want them to be. See what you belive, think what you want, everyone's different and thats good.


Children In the Dark. sample of the book i wrote

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Thank i might post the full version



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