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do you think my poem is good ?

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Posted over 3 years ago
Hi I wanted to show you one of the poems I wrote . Please rate this scale to 1-10.
I hear the voices inside my head. 
They keep telling me that I am in a 
nightmare. I tell them to be quiet and 
to go away. However they refuse. They 
tell me to kill. I say no. They say to 
die. I say no. I hear the voices inside 
my head. My head hurts

Brianna Gurl


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Posted over 3 years ago
This is not a poem you wrote. This was copied and pasted from another site.

i CANNOT OK

My name is Ellie ♥
Jordan is perfect... End of story

Oh and also... Nate is a beautiful human being♥

OMG I CANNOTTT

My best friend made this for me♥


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Posted over 3 years ago

"IlluminateItEllieex" wrote:

This is not a poem you wrote. This was copied and pasted from another site.


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"IlluminateItEllieex" wrote:

This is not a poem you wrote. This was copied and pasted from another site.


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