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A letter from hell

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rhonick
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What if?
What if you had a friend without knowing Jesus Christ as their personal savior?What if she or he went to hell?
What if one day you received a letter from beyond? A letter from hell.A letter from your friend in the flames of eternal torment.here is his letter.

Dear Zack,

I died today.

Its a lot different than i thought.You see.i always thought that dieing would bring me to a world that's foggy and hazy.but this place is crystal clear....
Its even more real than my life on earth.
I can think,i can talk, i could even feel.right after the wreck i could feel my spirit feeling my body it was the weirdest thing Zack i thought i heard you screaming out to me man must have been imagining things.At first i was just standing in line getting registered i guess they asked me for my name, they began to look in this thing called the book of life, i guess they couldn't find it though, cause this huge angel standing next to me grabbed me by the arm and started dragging me away...i was terrified.
I had no idea what was going on...I asked the angel where he was taking me, but he didn't answer.
So I asked him again and he told me and said only those whose names were written in the book of life could enter heaven...and the rest would be condemned to hell forever.
Man i was scared.The angel threw me into some kind of holding cell where I've been sitting and thinking for a long, long time. Do you want to know what I've been thinking about? I've been thinking about you.Zack your a christian,you told me so yourself.I mean we talked about it three different times today Kelly brought it up and you laughed it off, coach Adams brought it up and you changed the subject.I mean it came up before the wreck.And the question i cant get out of my mind is Zack...Why haven't you ever told me how to become a christian? You say your my friend but if you really were, you would have told me about this...Jesus.And told me how to escape this terrible that im headed for.
I can feel my heart pounding in my chest. the angels who have been chosen to cast me into hell are coming down the hallway, i can hear there foot steps.I've heard of this hell Zack,they call it the lake of fire.I cant stand it Zack, im terrified.The angels are at the door, oh no..oh no!There coming in and pointing at me.There grabbing me and carrying me out of the room, i could already smell the burning sulfur and brimstone.I can see the edge of the cliff where hell burns.this is it, i am without hope.Were coming closer...and closer!...closer!...my heart is bursting with fear.There holding me over the flames!Im damned forever!This is is they have thrown me in.Fire!Pain!Hell!
Why Zack didnt you ever tell me about Jesus?


singed,
your friend Josh

p.s. wish you were here


Don't bother.
don't bother me with souls to save i have my own agenda theres school to do, sports to play,importent stuff to attend to.
Don't bother me with my friend at work, he's got his own religion,i dont have time to change his mind.He'll make his own desicions.
Don't bother me with that little girl playing in the street.She's much too young too understand. That the savior she could meet.
Dont bother me with the sounds i hear, the sounds of people shrieking, although i wonder who they are.Who are these victims screaming?
Don't bother me with who they are,i realy dont want the blame.
Cause its my friend at work and that little girl.
Who from hell,screamed out my name.



A letter from hell

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Tongue Out Wow! straNge to reaD... but felt mOre straNge to see it's name here OMG! on kW ....!

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A letter from hell

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This is really interesting to read, a great piece of writing.

~Always be who you are,and remember, you are higher up than those who try to bring you down~


A letter from hell

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rhonick
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Yeah it is kinda scary well kinda but you can feel the mood



A letter from hell

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nascarawesome
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Nice story. But weird thing is; my name is Zack. e.e

Hello. I am Zack. What do you want to know about me? I'm just a regular old user who isn't quite active anymore. If you see this either I am on a visit or back for good.


A letter from hell

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XxUnicornDreamxX
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AHHHH!! D: 

~Always be who you are,and remember, you are higher up than those who try to bring you down~


A letter from hell

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This story is adorable 

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A letter from hell

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This is about the best thing I've read on KW!

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A letter from hell

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Wow.....


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