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ShyFox
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October 2013
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Posted almost 3 years ago
i really want feedback for this, it's my first poem I've put on here, I hope you like it:

​Listen,
Just shout your mouth and listen,
Just for a second,
Turn around,
I've been standing behind you for ten minutes,
Tapping you on the shoulder,
Asking you a question,
Its really important,
But you don't care,
Don't care that I'm your best friend,
Don't care that I need your help,
Don't care that I'm the one who has helped you a thousand times before,
Because you have a new friend now,
And suddenly I don't matter,
Suddenly I'm invisible,
To everyone,
But this is important,
So just shut your mouth and listen,
I need your help...

ShyFox
Read. Write. Listen. Live. Doodle.This is who I am, get over it smile


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Posted almost 3 years ago
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BuzzJuzz
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Posts: 447
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Posted almost 3 years ago
its just cool! sweet n short! Wink





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Kirsteeeeen
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Posted almost 3 years ago
It's pretty good. smile


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dogfobia
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Posts: 593
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Posted almost 3 years ago
wow thats really good

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And I'll be gone gone tonight
The fire beneath my feet is burning bright
The way that I been holdin' on so tight
With nothing in between ~ Story of My Life by 1D


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