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Savior. Rated [13+] (Unless You Are Mature)

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Well, it has been awhile since I have posted a Poem.
Please, don't take this off. It shows truth.
Please don't be mean. We all have our own opinions, but no need to knock me down for it.For others, please enjoy. c:



If You Are 12 Or Younger, I Suggest You Not To Go Down Any Further. Unless You Are Mature, And Don't Get Offended Easily. This Post Is Mainly For Users [13+]. You Have Been WARNED.
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Once Upon A Time,
There Was A Town Full Of Crime,
All The People,
Unhappy All The Time,
The Children Would Sit And Weep,
The Adults Would Sit And Compete,
All The Lies Mixed With Pain,
I Don't Think I Could Take This Game,
What Have They Done To Us?
Is There A Reason To Kick Us Around Like Dust?
Is There A Reason To Keep This Game Playing?
I Don't Think This Is What We Call Freedom,
This Is Just More Than Whips And Chains,
This Is What We Can Call Torture,
None Less Than Called Law Order,
This Was All In Their Plans,
Now They Have Our Money In Their Hands,
Now We Need To Cry Out And Take These Words, (The Bible)
We Need To Keep Speaking Them Until Their Heard,
Millions Of People Sick And Failing,
We Hear None Or Less Of Men Crying,
Woman Selling Their Bodies,
We Now Have Babies Dying,
All Because Of This Ruthless Control,
They Have Sold Their Souls,
To Get This Useless Gold,
We Have This Last Chance,
Here Comes The Big Man,
Standing Firm,
Not Too Happy With What We've Done,
He Has Come,
He's Here To Bring Down His Final Kingdom,
He Has Saved,
We Give Him Praise.
...
Once Upon A Time,
There Was A Beautiful Light,
All The People Happy All The Time,
The Children Would Laugh And Play,
The Adults Would Sit And Praise,
No More Pain,
No More Tears,
After All These Years,
We Have Found Nothing But Happiness,
I'm In Tears,
He's The King,
He's The Father,
We Are Forever Happy,
No More Problems,
We Die Never,
We Live Forever
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Poem Written By: Atlanta.


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I Hope You Enjoyed! This Was Written By Me. So, I Did NOT Take It. Thanks For Reading! c:

 



Strength is not only surviving, but admitting your mistakes, realizing your weaknesses, acknowldging your accomplishments and taking action.


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That's amazing! It really is!

Muffin Gif c:


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It's awesome. I love it. I am 12 years old, but yet I think it's a great poem, phenomenal and really noteworthy. the title's good, too.

Window snap.

Let the storm rage on.♥


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Oh, thank you very much for your feedback! It means tons to me. =D


Strength is not only surviving, but admitting your mistakes, realizing your weaknesses, acknowldging your accomplishments and taking action.


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Is this supposed to be some edgy metaphor for modern day society or something?

i am neurotic and totally illogical


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Such an awesome peice... I could NEVER do this






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Perfection perfection!!! Keep doing more!!!! This is the truth... Now what has our world come to?

Yo yo, Kara in the house!!!

Sonic's the name and speeds my game- Sonic the hedgehog


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"Theocrat" wrote:

Is this supposed to be some edgy metaphor for modern day society or something?

Indeed it is. c:


Strength is not only surviving, but admitting your mistakes, realizing your weaknesses, acknowldging your accomplishments and taking action.


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Thank you guys for being nice about it, heh. Means so much to me you guys are reading it! cx Better than it sitting in my folders getting messed up. You all rock. c:


Strength is not only surviving, but admitting your mistakes, realizing your weaknesses, acknowldging your accomplishments and taking action.


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That is truly amazing, wonderful job. 

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