x

Meet New Friends!

Recommended friends are based on your interests. Make sure they are up to date.

Friends ff8c072dd79a91c1300f032d674241a8d64367100ffb1f25fa3f9bec4a05319f
Kidzworld Logo

General

Why?

← Previous 1
Posted By:
Nightlock
Nightlock
Member since:
December 2013
Status:
Offline

Posts: 12
Star 771721baa52164faab3e80914eb3e8e418513288f39d7ccffd0d5c4f8d045d1eStar 771721baa52164faab3e80914eb3e8e418513288f39d7ccffd0d5c4f8d045d1e
Posted almost 4 years ago
Tears poured out,
when his words came out.
Everything he said,
just caused another doubt.
Sne was never good enough,
not even for her.
But now her dreams
flew by broken by a slur.
He said he loved her,
then took it right back.
He said he cared,
but said it to attack.
One tear at a time
stained her pretty face.
No one knew she was so fragile.
Like a snipped piece of lace.
She stared at the knife,
as a tear hit the ground.
Would she dare use it,
when it once spread her feelings around?
She used to cut but stopped,
Happy for a while.
But he killed her, 
every time he smiled.
She wondered why,
He made her cry.
Make her not want to live,
but die.
With a tear stained face,
She took her life.
Killed herself.
With her already used knife.
She did it for love,
her tears said it all.
He was her depression,
when he pretended to fall.
No more tears,
on her tear stained face.
Nothing left,
but the tears that took place.

Posted By:
CandyDreamer Lock e1691472cafece64304be81c5c9c507a93800d3a6cd5948297266277351b71ef
CandyDreamer
Member since:
August 2013
Status:
Offline

Posts: 2952
Star 771721baa52164faab3e80914eb3e8e418513288f39d7ccffd0d5c4f8d045d1eStar 771721baa52164faab3e80914eb3e8e418513288f39d7ccffd0d5c4f8d045d1eStar 771721baa52164faab3e80914eb3e8e418513288f39d7ccffd0d5c4f8d045d1eStar 771721baa52164faab3e80914eb3e8e418513288f39d7ccffd0d5c4f8d045d1eStar 771721baa52164faab3e80914eb3e8e418513288f39d7ccffd0d5c4f8d045d1e
Posted almost 4 years ago
Great poem :'D

*.


Posted By:
Nightlock
Nightlock
Member since:
December 2013
Status:
Offline

Posts: 12
Star 771721baa52164faab3e80914eb3e8e418513288f39d7ccffd0d5c4f8d045d1eStar 771721baa52164faab3e80914eb3e8e418513288f39d7ccffd0d5c4f8d045d1e
Posted almost 4 years ago
Thank you. I wasn't expecting someone to comment that fast. smile

Posted By:
CandyDreamer Lock e1691472cafece64304be81c5c9c507a93800d3a6cd5948297266277351b71ef
CandyDreamer
Member since:
August 2013
Status:
Offline

Posts: 2952
Star 771721baa52164faab3e80914eb3e8e418513288f39d7ccffd0d5c4f8d045d1eStar 771721baa52164faab3e80914eb3e8e418513288f39d7ccffd0d5c4f8d045d1eStar 771721baa52164faab3e80914eb3e8e418513288f39d7ccffd0d5c4f8d045d1eStar 771721baa52164faab3e80914eb3e8e418513288f39d7ccffd0d5c4f8d045d1eStar 771721baa52164faab3e80914eb3e8e418513288f39d7ccffd0d5c4f8d045d1e
Posted almost 4 years ago

"Nightlock" wrote:

Thank you. I wasn't expecting someone to comment that fast. smile
Big Grin Keep up the good work! Big Grin

*.


Posted By:
Dfire_2531359 Lock e1691472cafece64304be81c5c9c507a93800d3a6cd5948297266277351b71ef
Dfire_2531359
Member since:
July 2013
Status:
Offline

Posts: 3
Star 771721baa52164faab3e80914eb3e8e418513288f39d7ccffd0d5c4f8d045d1e
Posted almost 4 years ago
I love thisso much. Mames me feel sa but so happy that you could make feel that way

Posted By:
Nightlock
Nightlock
Member since:
December 2013
Status:
Offline

Posts: 12
Star 771721baa52164faab3e80914eb3e8e418513288f39d7ccffd0d5c4f8d045d1eStar 771721baa52164faab3e80914eb3e8e418513288f39d7ccffd0d5c4f8d045d1e
Posted almost 4 years ago
Always!

Posted By:
Fenmore
Fenmore
Member since:
December 2013
Status:
Offline

Posts: 230
Star 771721baa52164faab3e80914eb3e8e418513288f39d7ccffd0d5c4f8d045d1eStar 771721baa52164faab3e80914eb3e8e418513288f39d7ccffd0d5c4f8d045d1eStar 771721baa52164faab3e80914eb3e8e418513288f39d7ccffd0d5c4f8d045d1eStar 771721baa52164faab3e80914eb3e8e418513288f39d7ccffd0d5c4f8d045d1e
Posted almost 4 years ago
That was awesome! I love this! Thanks for writing it,and keep up the great work!


Posted By:
Nightlock
Nightlock
Member since:
December 2013
Status:
Offline

Posts: 12
Star 771721baa52164faab3e80914eb3e8e418513288f39d7ccffd0d5c4f8d045d1eStar 771721baa52164faab3e80914eb3e8e418513288f39d7ccffd0d5c4f8d045d1e
Posted almost 4 years ago

"Fenmore" wrote:

That was awesome! I love this! Thanks for writing it,and keep up the great work!

Hey, thanks. I appreciate it when people say they like my writing.

Posted By:
hugebear Lock e1691472cafece64304be81c5c9c507a93800d3a6cd5948297266277351b71ef
hugebear
Member since:
February 2007
Status:
Offline

Posts: 30521
Star 771721baa52164faab3e80914eb3e8e418513288f39d7ccffd0d5c4f8d045d1eStar 771721baa52164faab3e80914eb3e8e418513288f39d7ccffd0d5c4f8d045d1eStar 771721baa52164faab3e80914eb3e8e418513288f39d7ccffd0d5c4f8d045d1eStar 771721baa52164faab3e80914eb3e8e418513288f39d7ccffd0d5c4f8d045d1eStar 771721baa52164faab3e80914eb3e8e418513288f39d7ccffd0d5c4f8d045d1e
Posted almost 4 years ago
I love this poem smile Thanks for sharing it xD 

___________________________
hugebear from gracie and mia
classicalmusicisepicdonethis for me siggy :love thank you

from classicalmusicisepic for mesiggy


hugebearkeep calm and hug ted


Posted By:
Nightlock
Nightlock
Member since:
December 2013
Status:
Offline

Posts: 12
Star 771721baa52164faab3e80914eb3e8e418513288f39d7ccffd0d5c4f8d045d1eStar 771721baa52164faab3e80914eb3e8e418513288f39d7ccffd0d5c4f8d045d1e
Posted almost 4 years ago
Thanks, I'm glad everyone likes it.

← Previous 1

Latest Forum Posts

The person below me

Count to 60 before a Jr. Mod posts

The person below me

Count to 60 before a Jr. Mod posts

The person below me

Count to 60 before a Jr. Mod posts

The person below me

Count to 60 before a Jr. Mod posts

Count to 60 before a Jr. Mod posts

Count to 60 before a Jr. Mod posts

Latest Videos

Play Online Games