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Tears poured out,
when his words came out.
Everything he said,
just caused another doubt.
Sne was never good enough,
not even for her.
But now her dreams
flew by broken by a slur.
He said he loved her,
then took it right back.
He said he cared,
but said it to attack.
One tear at a time
stained her pretty face.
No one knew she was so fragile.
Like a snipped piece of lace.
She stared at the knife,
as a tear hit the ground.
Would she dare use it,
when it once spread her feelings around?
She used to cut but stopped,
Happy for a while.
But he killed her, 
every time he smiled.
She wondered why,
He made her cry.
Make her not want to live,
but die.
With a tear stained face,
She took her life.
Killed herself.
With her already used knife.
She did it for love,
her tears said it all.
He was her depression,
when he pretended to fall.
No more tears,
on her tear stained face.
Nothing left,
but the tears that took place.


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Great poem :'D

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Thank you. I wasn't expecting someone to comment that fast. smile


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Thank you. I wasn't expecting someone to comment that fast. smile
Big Grin Keep up the good work! Big Grin

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I love thisso much. Mames me feel sa but so happy that you could make feel that way


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Always!


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That was awesome! I love this! Thanks for writing it,and keep up the great work!


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"Fenmore" wrote:

That was awesome! I love this! Thanks for writing it,and keep up the great work!

Hey, thanks. I appreciate it when people say they like my writing.


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I love this poem smile Thanks for sharing it xD 

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Thanks, I'm glad everyone likes it.


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