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my new poem the things you do

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Posted almost 12 years ago

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i cry and cry
and wait for you
i cry and cry
for someone to help me threw
to help me cope
with the things you do
well you sit there
and boo
and the things i do

PeAcE oUt <3 LuV mE
If you fall in love you may never get back up. That''s why they call it falling.

whats the worst that i can say
things are better if i stay
so long and goodnight
so long and goodnight
and if you carry on this way
things are better if i stay
so long and goodnight
so long and goodnight
awesome song
great lyrics

guess what song?

I''m bossy, I''m the first girl to scream on a track
I switched up the beat of the drum
That''s right i brought all the boys to the yard
And that''s right, i''m the one that''s tattooed on his arm
I''m bossy, I''m the girl y''all love to hate
I''m the chick that''s raised the stake
I told young stunna he should switch debate
I''m back with an 808 cause i''m bossy





Posted almost 12 years ago

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o i wish i could write poems like ya. i mean i only write slam poems.xxxx align=''center''>

good job.

yo dis ya girl da big M


Posted almost 12 years ago

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willl somebody else rate it plllllllllleeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaasssssssssssseeeeeeeeeeee

PeAcE oUt <3 LuV mE
If you fall in love you may never get back up. That''s why they call it falling.

whats the worst that i can say
things are better if i stay
so long and goodnight
so long and goodnight
and if you carry on this way
things are better if i stay
so long and goodnight
so long and goodnight
awesome song
great lyrics

guess what song?

I''m bossy, I''m the first girl to scream on a track
I switched up the beat of the drum
That''s right i brought all the boys to the yard
And that''s right, i''m the one that''s tattooed on his arm
I''m bossy, I''m the girl y''all love to hate
I''m the chick that''s raised the stake
I told young stunna he should switch debate
I''m back with an 808 cause i''m bossy





Posted almost 12 years ago

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I''m not poem expert, but...it seems lacking to me. And it sounds like something Nsync or Hilary Duff would sing.


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