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Okay, for language, we had to write poems. So, this one is about the job that we want to have when we grow up. I want to be an interventional cardiologist (heart doctor). I got an A+ on this. It's not that good, though. I don't know. The picture I drew for this poem was good, so I think that's why. I often seem to tend to have LONG poems...  I'll post my REALLY long poem later. By the way, my poem doesn't really rhyme. Tell me what you think! I accept 'constructive criticism' and feedback, just don't be too mean or harsh. 
                                                   Cardiologist   by Rayna (FireWolfRain) 

                                      A cardiologist is a heart doctor, 
                                                    not a therapist, 
                                                    but a mentor, 
                                          of interns and fellows. 

                                               Blood and veins, 
                         nothing that should make you disgusted. 
                                                Just be aware,
                                   of the patients everywhere.

                         Oh dear, oh dear 12 years of education. 
                          Oh my, oh my, they wish to get rid of,
                    bad hearts, the diseased and lives' termination. 

I'm FireWolfRain a.k.a Rain!

SLIGHTLY INACTIVE ~ ROLE-PLAYER


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Another good poem.

Chase Elliott at Watkins Glen

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It's good, it would be better if it were longer though. c: 
Congrats for your A+. smile


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gr8 m8 i r8 8/8

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"Jelly3" wrote:

It's good, it would be better if it were longer though. c: 

Congrats for your A+. smile


My teacher wanted it to be short. This was my shortest poem... 
Have you seen 'Tracking you down, my little friend'. 

Thanks!  

I'm FireWolfRain a.k.a Rain!

SLIGHTLY INACTIVE ~ ROLE-PLAYER


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"FireWolfRain" wrote:



"Jelly3" wrote:


It's good, it would be better if it were longer though. c: 



Congrats for your A+. smile


My teacher wanted it to be short. This was my shortest poem... 
Have you seen 'Tracking you down, my little friend'. 

Thanks!  

In that case, it's pretty awesome. Big Grin
No, I will now, though. 
You're welcome. (:


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