lol Ok let me try:
Good: This is Maria Goerge Sally Elizabeth Justine Stephanie Goerge Kelley, she pretty darn cool
for a 14 year old! One day Maria was skateboarding over some extremly
high ramps at the skateboarding park when her friends came over. They were all like " Heyy hon! Did you hear, Jason had to go to an Opra with his mom
! BTW there's a haunted mansion over the hill (*points to a small hill*)" And Maria was all like " Sure, I guess I could hang with you to Barbie Jr.s for a while. It's cool."
Bad: tHis is maria. shes cool. and forteen. maria likes to skatbord alot. plus Also she likes to meet friends that she knows alredy. theY told her to go to the honted manson so she said yes.