Good advice for when I write a story!

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This helped me alot, thanks

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Good grammar? Most poet's grammar is equal to my little brother's...and that includes me. 

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"umbreon2000" wrote:

Good grammar? Most poet's grammar is equal to my little brother's...and that includes me. 

I'm saying it should improve. 

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lol Ok let me try: Good: This is Maria Goerge Sally Elizabeth Justine Stephanie Goerge Kelley, she pretty darn cool for a 14 year old! One day Maria was skateboarding over some extremly high ramps at the skateboarding park when her friends came over. They were all like " Heyy hon! Did you hear, Jason had to go to an Opra with his mom! BTW there's a haunted mansion over the hill (*points to a small hill*)" And Maria was all like " Sure, I guess I could hang with you to Barbie Jr.s for a while. It's cool." Bad: tHis is maria. shes cool. and forteen. maria likes to skatbord alot. plus Also she likes to meet friends that she knows alredy. theY told her to go to the honted manson so she said yes.

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I think Harry Potter is THE BEST book ever!

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WELL YOU MUST HAVE GOOD PUNCTUATION.  BECAUSE IF YOUR WRITING IS LIKE THIS NOBODY WANTS TO READ IT AND THERE IS NO PUNCTUATION BUT ANYWAY IF YOU WANT TO READ THIS BUT I JUST SAID DONT READ IT THEN PLEASE READ IT ANYWAY BECAUSE IF U HAVE NO PUNCTUATION THEN NOBODY LIKES YOU ANYMORE HAHA BUT THANKS FOR READING THIS BY SUPERTIANZEE PLEASE BE MY FRIEND  

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Good. ^^

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mkE shUr3 yhu 4lawysss tlkK l1yk dhI$$

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"Authoritarian" wrote:

mkE shUr3 yhu 4lawysss tlkK l1yk dhI$$

adding to the OP 

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