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Chapter 1: Continued I suddenly became all too aware of my surroundings, when truthfully I had no clue. I couldn't open my eyes. Not even to small slits. I could still feel the sharp pain throughout my body, even though the shuddering had slowed down. I groaned, "Why am I here....what happened...?" I asked no one. I had to keep hope that someone would find me here, wherever here is. My heartbeat was slow. Really slow. My breathing began to slow also, My lungs refused to fill. My ribs felt as if they were being crushed, splintering into my lungs.  

I would make this all cool and stuff, but I am far too lazy to do so.


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Finishing up the start of chapter 2 right now.

I would make this all cool and stuff, but I am far too lazy to do so.


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Chapter 2: Part 1 My body felt like it was going to rip apart. My skin stung from the fiery heat. I felt a small trickle of blood come from my nose, that's probably not as bad as what condition my shoulder is in. I groaned and clawed at the ground with the bit of strength I actually had. I bit my lip until I could taste blood.  (later.)

I would make this all cool and stuff, but I am far too lazy to do so.


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"A16" wrote:

Wonderful, just wonderful! -Clapps-
Haha! Thanks Ayve! xD yes. Variation of Avery.

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Chapter 2: Continued- The heat that had taken over my delicate skin began to tingle, like someone was throwing ice cubes at me, one at a time. My lungs ached from lack of filling quicker. I couldn't feel my legs, and the back of my head was surely bleeding, judging by how I got knocked backwards off the stairs. As I lie there remembering everything that had already happened, having no clue of the future, memories that didn't belong to me ran through my head. I saw a deep ravine with thick muddy water, woods everywhere, a full, bright moon while standing on a cliff, and last, the sensation of dying.  

I would make this all cool and stuff, but I am far too lazy to do so.


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Did that show up?

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Chapter 3- My headache had returned as the scenes passed through my thoughts. I couldn't think clearly. The images flashed by slower and slower until they finally stopped. A shiver vibrated against my spine, making almost my whole body shake. No, it wasn't just the shiver, I was...scared. At least I was finally able to open my eyes. Even though everything around me was pitch black. Darkness. Nothing, absolutely nothing... I suddenly felt sorry for myself, even though this was all my fault! If only I had woken up earlier, listened to mom, never had the fight.... All because of the fight we had last night over dad... She left, why didn't I remember that before. She left. She would never have found me lying on the floor, because she was GONE. A tear formed in my eye, but I quickly blinked it away. My stomach felt tight, it felt like it was twisting, normal for sadness right..? My skin began to sting painfully. I felt like I was being torn apart, then nothing. That's what I felt. Nothing. Then I was gone. 

I would make this all cool and stuff, but I am far too lazy to do so.


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Shay. Why you so good.  I LOVE it!  c:

oh my god becky


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"LukaMegurine" wrote:

Shay. Why you so good.  I LOVE it!  c:
xD Thanks LuLu.

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"shadgirl1" wrote:

"LukaMegurine" wrote:

Shay. Why you so good.  I LOVE it!  c:
xD Thanks LuLu.
ZOMG!  The prettiest princess that thank you to me! Nah, nah JK[..Not about the prettiest princess part.], you're welcome!

oh my god becky


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