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My OUTDATED life ....

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the story characters- Hey everyone !! im Andrea Roberts...ppl call me Andy or amy im cool with anything.....i have a elder sister called Sarah and gosh shes quite pretty ..and theres George my big bro who loves chocolates. i have foster parents , mom's name is Lily and pa's names Samson he has muscles like those sweaty bodybuilders in the television....we are not so rich but we can just afford the things which are important ..

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My OUTDATED life ....

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" My father has been transferrd to germany!  yay!! wow the castle is so good and look at my room ! its so glossy!...."" Andy! Andy! Wake up , wake up u lazybug! " George yells at me....i wake up and rubbing my eyes say " Was this....was this all a dream?" " Yes it was fathead!" he replies and rushes out... i stare around my room... ROOM? oh no thatz not the correct word...my room is the attic..i have a bed made of newspapers and a my pa's old t-sshirt as pillow... a small broken cupboard , an old bookshelf, or whats left of  it and a cracked mirror at the roof.....thatz it... i go down to the wash basin and take out my '8 brisled brush' .i open the tap and oooooooooh!!!! frezing cold water rushes out....i shout at Sarah " Hey why everyday u dont switch on the heater huh?" " Well u should remember to switch it on early!!!!" Sarah yells back.i somehow manage to brush ..."Andy come here! " Sarah yells. i go to her room and wow her room is so amazing ! but im unlucky..... just bcoz im adopted thiz...this isnt fair! She shows me her new perfume and she almost kept it in my hands when she drops it " Mom! Andy broke my perfume!" i ran out of her room and just on the stairs when before i knew George kept his filthy leg on which i tripped and tumbled by the stairs.... finally when i reached down my pa pulls me up by my hair and throws me down...ouch ! i think somethings under my elbow...i take it up and find out a glas earing smashed to pieces..i take a look at my elbow and god its bleeding! " Honey,wheres my glass earing? i cant find it anywhere" says my mom coming out of her room and on noticing the broken earring she blew up in fumes and shouted," Andy, u will not get canteen money for one whole month!" What? oh no...

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My OUTDATED life ....

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 I rush for breakfast and well my mom has made some burnt bread and sour milk for me....what a mom! I could see delights in others' plates and this is partiality.... i ask for something else but my pa stops me saying, " dont be such a fussy girl ! eat what is given!" ughhh! thatz enough! i take my bread and milk and throw it in the trash can... I race up to my roomm take out my bag dressed up and left for school....better shcool than home! atleast ill be with my best frnd Ho short for Holly

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r u thinking of leaving ur home ?? if yes then dont u  r  too wrong thinking u will leave home bc u got savings. after parents siblings theres no one who take cares of u !so just calm down sis and bros always yell ! just ignore thats all.if they yell on u that doesnt mean they hate u ! and ur new school friends everything new ok thats gonna be a hard job ! .but best of luck

Danbo i love danbo xD


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I live in Pakistan so my outdated in P.A.K Maybe i hope my next outdated life in India with my boyfriendWink Tongue

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NOTE : 1. Im not thr in the story the character is speaking.... 2. Please ignore grammatical errors... and i hope u like the story! dont forget to comment! Big Grin

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thats good u told everyone that it was a handmade story , but it seems too realistic good job ! :::smile

Danbo i love danbo xD


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I walk to school and on the way i team up with Ho... i told her all abt the incidents in the morning and she replied.." Wow thatwas a bad start" i tellh her abt my small plan " Hey im thinking of running away... wont u want to come with me?" Ho smiles and says " Well why not?" Ho too suffers like me..same way....we r like sisters basically " So lets discuss it in the recess" i told hr when we reached class...

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tring.....the bell goes for recess . me and holly rush out and sit on the benches to discuss abt our new found plan " so when are u actually planning to leave?" Ho asks." Probably tonight" shes answered. " what! tonight!" "yes any probs?" " no its just tht im excited!" " okay so pack all u will be needing " " What abt money?" " Money right. i hav some 500 dollars...my parents saved it for me.. you?"  " well i hav 300 dollars... i worked for my neighbour for almost 4 yrs" " thatz good ...so we will leave at 11:30 pm and catch the bus to downtown street...so we meet again at the bus stop  kay?" " okay! at last the taste of freedom" tring.......  its maths time!

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I Rush back home I can't wait till 11:30...I go to my room . My Tummy is rumbling coz I didn't hav lunch... I take out my backpack and stuff in some clothes, a small pouch of fever tablets,my small nice little memories, paper and pen just in case and that's it I think I hav.... I slowly take out my money and keep it in my small cute treasure box and that too goes into my bag..by the time I see the clock it's 9:00 pm and I rush for dinner... Same thing burnt salty noodles... I throw it again and manage with some snacks I had.. I wrote a small note and left it on my bed... I wore my watch and took a small nap till it is 11:30 pm... I wake up after sometime and on noticing it is already time I swept down the stairs.. And cccccrrrreeeeaaaakkkk! The stair makes noise " halt! Who goes thr! " pa shouts..I know it's him..oh no now what?

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