In a depressed mood tonite, so I wrote another poem.  I Can't Take It Much More.  My heart starts to ache Surrounded by darkness and cold, I’m afraid and alone With no one to hold.   My eyes fill with tears So I hide them away, Though no one ever notices But I prefer it that way.   Thick, dark gray clouds Seem to hang around me, And I hide in my bedroom Where no one hears my plea.   No sunshine to warm me Only heavy showers of rain, I should be used to the feeling The one I only feel is pain.   I start to feel as though I am drowning in my tears, I wish there was someone here To quieten my frightening fears.   My soul has darkened My heart is now crying, My heart can’t take much more My soul is now dying.  What do you peoples think?  Thanks for reading  ~Jiminy~ 

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Aww this is sad! But still amazing!  Will u write any more poems? Bcuz urs are awesome!   (Btw, I love gerard to!) 

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"19Miley99" wrote:

Aww this is sad! But still amazing!  Will u write any more poems? Bcuz urs are awesome!   (Btw, I love gerard to!) 

Aww thanks! I might do some more tomorrow, glad you like it. And thanks again! xD  (OMG, ikr. I absolutely love Gerard!)  ~Jiminy~ 

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Love it. Reminds me a lot of what I used to be like.

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"blackdragondude350" wrote:

Love it. Reminds me a lot of what I used to be like.

Aww thanks! And it's kinda, basically how I am at the minute  ~Jiminy~

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OMQ! This is amazing, but sad. i love ur poems. will u write more?  

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"19georgia99" wrote:

OMQ! This is amazing, but sad. i love ur poems. will u write more?  

Thanks! I might be able do more today, depends on if my mom needs help   ~Jiminy~ 

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Aw this is great! But as everyone else has said previously, also sad. I hope you do write more poems, they're really good.   

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"ImGwen" wrote:

Aw this is great! But as everyone else has said previously, also sad. I hope you do write more poems, they're really good.   

Aww thanks! I might be doing more later today. Glad you like it   ~Jiminy~ 

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expresses my feelings

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