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If Tears Could Bring You Back

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JiminyCrispies
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I started writing a song on the piano for my grandpa, and decided to write a poem for him too. Hope you like it smile  If Tears Could Bring You Back  If tears could bring you back I’d hold you close to me, I’d keep the memory in a locket And I would give you the key.   If tears could bring you back I’d never let you go, Or at least while we were together Make time pass by us slow.   If tears could bring you back I’d cry an ocean for you, Because since you left me here I’ve only been feeling blue.   If tears could bring you back I couldn’t bare us to part, But you’ll never be forgotten Because you’ll stay in my heart.   If tears could bring you back Even just for a little while, I’d cry morning, noon and night Then each time I’d see you, I’d smile.    But tears can’t bring you back Even when I wish for them to, But as you pass through heaven’s gates Remember I’ll always miss you.  What do you peoples think?  Hope you liked it smile  ~Jiminy~ 


If Tears Could Bring You Back

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19Miley99
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OMQ I cried reading this! Im being serious! Its amazingly awesome just like ur other poems. will u write anymore poems? even if they are sad is till love them! Blush

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If Tears Could Bring You Back

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"19Miley99" wrote:

OMQ I cried reading this! Im being serious! Its amazingly awesome just like ur other poems. will u write anymore poems? even if they are sad is till love them! Blush
That ^^ (seriously miley did cry xD)

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If Tears Could Bring You Back

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JiminyCrispies
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"19georgia99" wrote:

"19Miley99" wrote:

OMQ I cried reading this! Im being serious! Its amazingly awesome just like ur other poems. will u write anymore poems? even if they are sad is till love them! Blush
That ^^ (seriously miley did cry xD)
Aww thanks peoples! I might do another one later tonite. Glad you like it smile  ~Jiminy~ 


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Whitepaws101
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Since my dog died about  months ago and I still just can't seem toget her from my mind this peom is perfect.

Woof

"I'm only a crack in this castle of glass..." - Linkin Park

"It does get better"
No matter what happens, there is always hope for a brighter tommorrow.

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If Tears Could Bring You Back

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JiminyCrispies
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"Whitepaws101" wrote:

Since my dog died about  months ago and I still just can't seem toget her from my mind this peom is perfect.
Aww I know what you're going through, my dog got put down. Glad you like it and hope you're okayy smile  ~Jiminy~ 


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ImGwen
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Aw I cried reading this! It made me think of my dad Frown  Still, it's amazing! How do you think of these poems? Blush 

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If Tears Could Bring You Back

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JiminyCrispies
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"ImGwen" wrote:

Aw I cried reading this! It made me think of my dad Frown  Still, it's amazing! How do you think of these poems? Blush 
Aww thanks! And I'm sorry about you're dad, hope you're getting better and don't have to go the hospital as much.  I just write when I'm something comes into my mind, I only wrote this one bc I've been writing music on the piano for my grandpa and I felt like writing a poem too. Glad you like it smile  ~Jiminy~ 


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PixieTulip!
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omg u can be a poetess ,, its awesome =D

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If Tears Could Bring You Back

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JiminyCrispies
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"PixieTulip!" wrote:

omg u can be a poetess ,, its awesome =D
Aww thanks, glad you like it.  But I'm not that good lol smile  ~Jiminy~ 


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