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My Eternal Friend.

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JiminyCrispies
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Hai peoples! I'm not sure if I've posted this poem, so sorry if I have. This is the poem I've just entered in a competition a couple days ago, so hope y'all like it smile My Eternal Friend.  The news sinks in I’ve lost my friend, You’re life has sadly Come to an end.   It’s hard to believe You’re gone from me, Do you look down from heaven Send me a sign if you see.   Your toys on the floor Which always seemed to scatter, Little things like that Showed the world how much you matter.   Your food and water bowls Always turned upside down, Made me get cross But my heart would never frown.   A golden heart stopped beating But your love will never rest, God broke my heart to prove to me He only takes the best.   I’ll never stop loving you Each and everyday, In my heart you’re still here If only I’d made you stay.   Although you’re no longer on earth In my heart you’ve left a stain, And I’ll never forget you In my heart you will remain.   And as my last command The last one I shall send, Please wait for me in heaven As my eternal friend.  What do you peoples think?  Hope you like it smile  ~Jiminy~ 


My Eternal Friend.

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19Miley99
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OMQ Awesome! i cried so much reading that! its so goin to win! Big Grin 

R.I.P My Mom
08/25/77 - 01/02/12


My Eternal Friend.

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JiminyCrispies
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"19Miley99" wrote:

OMQ Awesome! i cried so much reading that! its so goin to win! Big Grin 
Aww thanks! Glad you like it and lol thanks xD  ~Jiminy~ 


My Eternal Friend.

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19Miley99
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"JiminyCrispies" wrote:

"19Miley99" wrote:

OMQ Awesome! i cried so much reading that! its so goin to win! Big Grin 
Aww thanks! Glad you like it and lol thanks xD  ~Jiminy~ 
Np and np lol xD 

R.I.P My Mom
08/25/77 - 01/02/12


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