She said love was non-existent when I asked her how she felt, though I thought it was pretty funny that it's her smile that makes me melt,  What kind of love was it really when you put it in retrospect, It's like there was a ghost inside your membrane that controlled your footsteps, I really loved you dearly beyond any other thing in life, And the minute you said "It's over" it felt like 10 hours strapped to a knife, I really honestly tried to understand this from your shoes and  point of view, But in the end I could find nothing to why you left me not even one single clue, I thought I was your lover, Your eternal man to be, Whatever happened to that vision that now we cannot see, I really cannot take this, Your with another man, My life feels like it's over like a lion and a lamb.

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PERSON 1: ITS A POEM NOT A RAP BUT I LOVE IT CAUSE IT REALLY DESCRIBES ME PERSON 2: Honestly, I think it sounds more like a poem than a rap. But it still is a truly beautiful thing to write for people to see (Two friends on one computer, so don't get confused :P)

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"Upwards" wrote:

She said love was non-existent when I asked her how she felt,
though I thought it was pretty funny that it's her smile that makes me melt, 
What kind of love was it really when you put it in retrospect,
It's like there was a ghost inside your membrane that controlled your footsteps,
I really loved you dearly beyond any other thing in life,
And the minute you said "It's over" it felt like 10 hours strapped to a knife,
I really honestly tried to understand this from your shoes and  point of view,
But in the end I could find nothing to why you left me not even one single clue,
I thought I was your lover,
Your eternal man to be,
Whatever happened to that vision that now we cannot see,
I really cannot take this,
Your with another man,
My life feels like it's over like a lion and a lamb.

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GOod!

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