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A Very Twisted Love

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Nevergonnabelandrysgirl
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Prologue- It had been six months since the party at the lake house. It had all started with Steven. Steven has jet balck hair with firery green eyes,that make me want to melt everytime i look into them. That night at the party, was the first time i had met him in my life. And at that time i had a boy friend Ray. Ray who was the baseballs tema pitcher and the basketball teams captain. But that night things changed forever.

Look for the girl
with the broken smile
and ask her if she wants to stay while.
She will be loved.
maroon 5-She will be loved.

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A Very Twisted Love

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caked7738
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More, please.

"Someone told me I'm immature, that I need to grow up. Guess who's not aloud in my treehouse, now?!"
"Shower=98% reflecting on the meanings of life, 2% actually washing myself."
"If my ceiling fan could hold my weight, I'd never be bored again."
"Half a dozen=because 'six' is way too long."
"Me: *wakes up*
-two hours later-
*gets out of bed*"


A Very Twisted Love

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Nevergonnabelandrysgirl
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Chapter 1-Bridgette. You see Ray was always to possive of me, but I guess that because I was the best girl he had ever had. Ray had told me since we were in the sixth grade we would be together forever. And each passing year we were together I believed more and more. It was our spohmoore year in highschool, when we went to the party at the lake house. And my life changed forever. I went with Ray to the party. After a couple hours were playing games we shouldnt have been playing. We played spin the bottle,kiss and tell,and couples all or nothing. After that Ray said he wanted to talk. We went back to his car and laid on the windshield. We began talking and everything was fine one minute and the next minute he was pushing me around and yelling at me. I sighed, I left with him, he took me home like I asked him to. After he called to say he was home. I left my house and went back to the party. Thats when I saw Steven. He strolled over and began talking to me. I didnt see anything that was wrong with ‘’just talking’’. Little did I know the whole baseball team was taking pictures of me and Steven talking and hanging out together. Steven was a transfer from Great Britian. His acent was perfect. The next morning I followed my usaul routine. When I arrived at school I met my boyfriend in the cafe. There was nothing unusaul about this, we did this every morning. I sat at the table with him drinking a peach smoothie. Ray beagn talking, telling me what the guys had told him. I sighed, and tried explaining things to him, but he said he would deal with me later. I skipped most of my classes. And at lunch when I went to my locker to talk to my bestfriend, there was a picture of me and Steven kissing in front of the lake house, but that hadnt ever happened. I found Ray he said he was willing to listening to my side of things at house later. We ate lunch together and even left school together. We talked things over he said we would be okay if I stayed away from Steven, I agreed. We had been together for four, almost five years now and I was willing to do anything to save this relationship.

Look for the girl
with the broken smile
and ask her if she wants to stay while.
She will be loved.
maroon 5-She will be loved.

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A Very Twisted Love

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Nevergonnabelandrysgirl
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Chapter 2-Ray. The way she looked at me with intense winter green eyes, made realize she was sincerely sorry for talking to Steven. I put her in my lap and held her close. I could see the tear stains on cheeks. I tilted her chin and made her look at me, I did everything I could to soothe her. She continued to look up at me, even after I let go of her chin. She said ‘’The truth was she was feeling hurt after the way I treated the last few minutes that I was at the party and she just wanted to know what felt like to be loved again’’. I watched her and I felt her breathe and her pulse. She stayed with me. Later that night we layed in bed talking. It got quite and then she said ‘’I hope we still do this when were old and married’’. I laughed and held her close. She put her head on my chest and I wrapped my arms around her, we fell alseep like this. The next morning I got her up and she changed. We went to school together. We went about our day together. And things were fine. We had made up and eerything was going smoothly until he began following her to all of her classes, this mad me mad so I didnt walk her to calss. I sat next to her in class though. I watched write something down on a piece of paper then she handed to me. I just want him to leave me alone, the paper. I dealt with him and he said he would. After a month or so things were better then they ever had been for us. We were what people called the perfect couple. We igorned it was niced, but I was happy as long as I was with Bridgette. And I was with Bridgette,so I was happy.On fifth year aniversary I took her back to the lake house for the weekend. There we made love, like we were going to die by Monday morning. Monday rolled around to soon. She didnt want to go back yet so we didnt. It was all about her. We stayed there until Tuesday night, then we went back. There was another lake house party coming up the next weekend. But we had no idea what was in store, this one was a teo night party. On fifth year aniversary I took her back to the lake house for the weekend. There we made love, like we were going to die by Monday morning. Monday rolled around to soon. She didnt want to go back yet so we didnt. It was all about her. We stayed there until Tuesday night, then we went back. There was another lake house party coming up the next weekend. But we had no idea what was in store, this one was a teo night party.

Look for the girl
with the broken smile
and ask her if she wants to stay while.
She will be loved.
maroon 5-She will be loved.

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A Very Twisted Love

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Nevergonnabelandrysgirl
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Im working on the next 2 chapters. The next 2 chapters are action packed.

Look for the girl
with the broken smile
and ask her if she wants to stay while.
She will be loved.
maroon 5-She will be loved.

Reache 1,000 comments on Wensday June 27,2012.


A Very Twisted Love

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Nevergonnabelandrysgirl
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Chapter 3-Steven. I couldnt get Bridgette off my min no matter how hard I tried. God I wanted her so bad I couldnt stand it. We I was at school or school events or even parties. I watched her every move. Her smile, everything about her was amazing. I just hated Ray, he was so mean to her. After a while me and Bridgette were good friends again. We could only talk when Ray was around which I found stupid, but if it kept okay with us being friends then it was just fine. I made her laugh and she made me laugh. And I just wished for once I could call her mine. I dreamed about her most of the time, and when I was dreaming about her. I wasnt dreaming at all. I sighed watching her and Ray from a safe distance from behind. Lately it was like she was happier with him, and she didnt want to leave him anymore. I was happy for her dont get me wrong, but I just wanted her so bad. A couple weeks later I began dating Madison. She looked almost exactly like Bridgette. I guess thats why I wanted to be with her that and to make Bridgette jealous. Bridgette and Ray caught to my game. I left Madison. I began dating a girl named Sarah. Thats when everything changed.

Look for the girl
with the broken smile
and ask her if she wants to stay while.
She will be loved.
maroon 5-She will be loved.

Reache 1,000 comments on Wensday June 27,2012.


A Very Twisted Love

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Chapter 4- The Party That Changed Our Lives Bridgette. I was going to be at the party for both nights, but Ray was only going to be at the party tonight. He wanted to see if could trust me. Which as far as I thought he could. But now I realized that he hadnt ever gotten completely past the whole thing that didnt happened at the last party we went. I just smiled and went to the party with him. Once again we made love. And he left at 6:00 Saturday night. Steven.I took that as my cahnce to talk to her without anything bad happening. I sat next to her we talked for a while. Her phone rang she answered. She said that Ray was coming back. She went up stairs and washed up and re-did her make up although we hadnt done anything at all. I watched them for a while. Then I hung out with some of the guys for while. We talked about all the things guys talk about. Ray. Somehow we had got into an arugement. Then the arugement turned into a fight. And I got mean said some hutrful things, and she seemed to okay. And after we started again. She wanted to leave but I wouldnt take her home, especially after what she did last time. Somewhow we found our way into the middle of the party. We were screaming and yelling at each other. And I dont what happened I just kinda of hit her. She ran crying towards the car. I sighed to myself. I got in and tried to hold and tried soothe things over. I told I was sorry a million times. After a while she walked away and into the room we were staying at at the lake house. I sighed I satyed downstairs. A while later I went to check on her, seemed fine. I think that night we both realized how miserable we both were. But niether one of us had the guts to tell the other it was over. I held for a while and she didnt want to leave the party, but I had to. We said goodbye, but id see her in the mornign. Actually it wouldnt have surprised if she were to show up at my door at one in the morning. Bridgette. I guess I felt lonely after he left. I cried until I cried my self to sleep. I woke about two hours later. I went down stairs and rejoined the party. I danced for a while. But seeing all of the happy couples just made me sad again I began walking upstairs, when I heard someone call my name. I turned around it was Steven. I give hims a half smile. Tears were rolling down my cheek again. And befoe I knew it we were in a bedroom all by oursleves. By ten a clock that night I had told him everything. And by midnight we had been making love for almost two hours. When I finally got hold of myself and realized what we were doing I pulled away got dressed and drove to Ray’s house.

Look for the girl
with the broken smile
and ask her if she wants to stay while.
She will be loved.
maroon 5-She will be loved.

Reache 1,000 comments on Wensday June 27,2012.


A Very Twisted Love

Posted By:
Nevergonnabelandrysgirl
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Anyone like it?

Look for the girl
with the broken smile
and ask her if she wants to stay while.
She will be loved.
maroon 5-She will be loved.

Reache 1,000 comments on Wensday June 27,2012.


A Very Twisted Love

Posted By:
Nevergonnabelandrysgirl
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Chapter 5- T

Look for the girl
with the broken smile
and ask her if she wants to stay while.
She will be loved.
maroon 5-She will be loved.

Reache 1,000 comments on Wensday June 27,2012.


A Very Twisted Love

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caked7738
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I like it. (:

"Someone told me I'm immature, that I need to grow up. Guess who's not aloud in my treehouse, now?!"
"Shower=98% reflecting on the meanings of life, 2% actually washing myself."
"If my ceiling fan could hold my weight, I'd never be bored again."
"Half a dozen=because 'six' is way too long."
"Me: *wakes up*
-two hours later-
*gets out of bed*"


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