So guys, I want your honest opinion. There's a flashback, so don't be too confused. If there is Flashback in bold print it's a flashback. Okay?

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Aniera watched the rain pelt off her window as they drove further and further down the curvy narrow road. It was a long journey. A tear dripped town her wet cheek that had saw another 5 tearstains. Where? You may ask. Well, lets see....
Flashback.
Aniera and Blaze were inseparable. Some said they were girlfriend and boyfriend but it wasn't true. They weren't in the least bit attracted to each other.
One day Aniera went to Blaze's house. She was upset. She knocked on the oak door with tears in her eyes. Blaze opened it.
"What's wrong?" He asked her as he brought her up to his room.
"We- we're moving." She sobbed. They hugged each other tight and cried. They loved each other. They had known each other since they were two.
Finally when Blaze had he words, he spoke.
"Where to?" He said.
".... Australia." Whispered Aniera.
To Be Continued...