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Posted By:

charter
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March, 2010

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Depression is the Infection that devours the soul and yet somehow Depression can be easily defeated Maybe the soul had some help to fight the virus within and I found the cure the cure is caring the cure is happiness the cure is friendship The Cure Is You.

Never give in to false connections Follow your own path and make your choices you are you and you alone -Charter

Depression

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mcdonaldburger
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July, 2012

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not very good you shud try to be more happy this will not get positive feedback because it is not a positive poem and you dont explain who 'you' is for the cure. any reader will think it's them and you will be forcing the guilt on them because they think the cure is them and they wont know what to do so like i said jsut make more positive poem u get better

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Posted By:

Don'tLoseHope
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July, 2012

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"mcdonaldburger" wrote:
not very good you shud try to be more happy this will not get positive feedback because it is not a positive poem and you dont explain who 'you' is for the cure. any reader will think it's them and you will be forcing the guilt on them because they think the cure is them and they wont know what to do so like i said jsut make more positive poem u get better

I'm not quite sure you understand poetry.

Depression

Posted By:

charter
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March, 2010

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I do understand it and the cure is you is meant that dont give in or surrender or if someone else is having depression help them

Never give in to false connections Follow your own path and make your choices you are you and you alone -Charter

Depression

Posted By:

JiminyCrispies
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January, 2012

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I like it ( =

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TaNet2165
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March, 2012

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I found this, read this, love it because its happening with a friend and it makes me sad. I understand this poem

T for Terrance, E for errance - "Shut up, now this is how you spell it. Its T, its E, its R, its R, its R, its R, its R, its R -" "how many R's are there?" "6." *BWAHAHAHAHA!!!*

TOM DALEY OH MY GOD.