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Tiny little heart shop, Fix my broken heart. A boy came and stole it; he ripped it apart. Split into two, damaged beyond repair,  He threw it on the ground and left it there. My heart has been broken, Oh so many times; He laughs at me now; he's on cloud 9. Please help me Heart Shop, make my dreams come true, Make my heart as good as new.


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It's wonderful. I don't know why no one else has posted. I don't think anyone on this site knows what good poetry is.

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^-^ Thanks. Maybe people just haven't seen it, or they don't like it and won't comment.


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I love it! You're awesome at poetry!Big Grin 

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Thanks ^-^


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THat is really cute o_o YOU have a real talent!
PLease write more.
xxx smile

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I don't really like writing here anymore because I'm terrified someone will plagerize. 

Thanks so much though (:



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Awesome smile


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its teally good and you are welcome

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