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classicalmusicisepic
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April, 2012

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Tiny little heart shop, Fix my broken heart. A boy came and stole it; he ripped it apart. Split into two, damaged beyond repair, He threw it on the ground and left it there. My heart has been broken, Oh so many times; He laughs at me now; he's on cloud 9. Please help me Heart Shop, make my dreams come true, Make my heart as good as new.

Tiny little heart shop.

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classicalmusicisepic
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Feedback?

Tiny little heart shop.

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Betelgeuse
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January, 2011

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It's wonderful. I don't know why no one else has posted. I don't think anyone on this site knows what good poetry is.

Why do churches teach fear when they should teach love?

If you don't have anything nice to wear, don't wear anything at all.

Tiny little heart shop.

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classicalmusicisepic
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^-^ Thanks. Maybe people just haven't seen it, or they don't like it and won't comment.

Tiny little heart shop.

Posted By:

JiminyCrispies
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January, 2012

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I love it! You're awesome at poetry!

Since I was little, whenever we were asked us what we wanted to be when we grew up, I would always reply with; Amy Lee
Studying
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Coincidence?I think not