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Tiny little heart shop, Fix my broken heart. A boy came and stole it; he ripped it apart. Split into two, damaged beyond repair,  He threw it on the ground and left it there. My heart has been broken, Oh so many times; He laughs at me now; he's on cloud 9. Please help me Heart Shop, make my dreams come true, Make my heart as good as new.


Posted over 5 years ago

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Feedback?


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It's wonderful. I don't know why no one else has posted. I don't think anyone on this site knows what good poetry is.

Why do churches teach fear when they should teach love?

If you don't have anything nice to wear, don't wear anything at all.


Posted over 5 years ago

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^-^ Thanks. Maybe people just haven't seen it, or they don't like it and won't comment.


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I love it! You're awesome at poetry!Big Grin 

Jag och min valp, Elvis
Me and my pup Elvis [ whispers ] I woke him up to do this c:


Posted over 5 years ago

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Thanks ^-^


Posted almost 5 years ago

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THat is really cute o_o YOU have a real talent!
PLease write more.
xxx smile

Be motivated! Haha


Posted almost 5 years ago

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I don't really like writing here anymore because I'm terrified someone will plagerize. 

Thanks so much though (:



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Awesome smile


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its teally good and you are welcome

Don't follow your dreams; Chase them


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