Chapter 1 The pain. The hurt. Of seeing you turn away from my life led me to despair and hatred. with bitter heartless thoughts. Nevertheless, I will enver forget her sweet face hr name was lucy. I, Sweeney Todd sat there in sadness. Looking out the window to see another miserable rainy day. I hated the weather these days, Never had sunny times not even for one day. I now lived in a barber shop on fleet street east of london with my sister nellie. Nellie was two years younger then me and made lovely pies and we got on quite well. Nellie helped me go through the tough times of loosing my wife. I could never forgive that judge turpin for taking lucy away from me I loved her with all my heart. Who does he think he is  taking away the most lovely possession away from a grown man?. That is for me to find out.... Sorry that its short. I don't have long..

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It's epic! 9/10.

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Why thank you. I put my herat and soul into my writing. Thank you very much Remeber, Anything you want to point out and/or correct, Go ahead

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