lol ok. i cant spell for my life ill have my friend correct it fist befor posting next time
"MikhailTal" wrote:Looks like a L4D story. Neat I liked it even though it's really short. Give it some proofreading to correct really obvious spelling errors (I took in the sweat sound of screams) and you're golden.
"LovinoTokyo" wrote:Who is this? you can find out if you fallow the story Chapter 1 Eat it. Eat the human. It doesn’t disserve to live. ------------------------Blood. Human Blood. I smelt flesh of the living getting ripped to shreds as I stood atop an apartment building structure. This land was ours now. Mine, my brothers, and sisters to share. I took in the sweat sound of screams from all around me. As I looked down I saw my brothers scavenging around for any more survivors. What are we? Humans call us many names, monsters, freaks, the undead but mostly Zombie. I stuck my foot off the edge of the building and started to plummet down to ground level. I landed on all fours. Humans named us on our ability, like my brother whom the humans named the smoker. I was named ’the hunter’. why I don’t know. It was possibly because of my ability to be able to leap great distances, track humans, and kill. Whatever the reason I liked it. ------------------I had recently heard from one of my brothers that there was a group of survivors near by so I headed that way. Apparently they were a bunch of girl humans in a pack trying to make there way our of the city. I clenched my claw tightly till I bled.“Well ill just have to fix that” I said to myself smirking as I leaped off and continued to track them.